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AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Great 1st Effort

I liked the brisk pace of the story, though it is a theme that's been penned to near death. Remember to proof read the story, then after a day away from it PROOF READ AGAIN. There are couple of obvious word use and grammatical errors.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
liked it

Women in the office are always very sexy! Nice story.

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