All Comments on 'Humanity 2.0, Year 028, Day 281'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
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way to short cant give that more than a 3

ambush184ambush184almost 11 years ago
now come on

WAY too much tease here. How about some longer segments. The story is good but needs more read time.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
sign of a good sci fi story

When I find myself skipping past the sex scenes to get to where the plot picks up again then it's definitely a good story. This chapter was definitely way too short. And do you have to make the protagonist a complete moron? Have him make at least one logical strategic decision.

Jackspeed2uJackspeed2ualmost 11 years ago
Excellent, want more more more!

Hey I read the complete series this arvo. Excellent story, fun sex and I love science fiction as well.

Please try to keep the chapters coming along. Very short ones like are more annoying than anything.

Great story, want more.

Thanks.

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