by adrammalech
WAY too much tease here. How about some longer segments. The story is good but needs more read time.
When I find myself skipping past the sex scenes to get to where the plot picks up again then it's definitely a good story. This chapter was definitely way too short. And do you have to make the protagonist a complete moron? Have him make at least one logical strategic decision.
Hey I read the complete series this arvo. Excellent story, fun sex and I love science fiction as well.
Please try to keep the chapters coming along. Very short ones like are more annoying than anything.
Great story, want more.
Thanks.