All Comments on 'Hunter Hunted Ch. 10'

The story is building all the time. cant wait for the next installment.

Cheers

I think you are doing a superb job on this series. Love your writing.

Meridian

God I hope she gets pregnant ~ she deserves a new life. And what the heck is happening to pour Nicholas??? What was he given, why and to what purpose??? You are the best at cliff hangers and sometimes i just want to strangle you and scream . . . yet it is what keeps us coming back! lol

I have the biggest grin on my face imagining the temperament of a kid with Hunter and Mirage as his or her parents .... let the games begin.

Praise to you, i so enjoy your stories and am in awe of your imagination. PJ xx

"Protection," that's honestly not a term I recall hearing in your stories in that context in quite some time. Great scene in the hummer, but absolutely hilarious that Mirage didn't realize she was getting humped bareback and raw by Hunter. I'm curious about the rules of her curse, does the curse besides making her immortal also make her infertile? I mean, I'm assuming no since she brought up the issue of protection with Hunter, unless she was worried about catching like a VD from him or something. I mean, its never come up before since she couldn't touch people or they go insane. But can she still procreate with the male persuasion? Would her curse be passed along to her offspring as well, like if her daughter or son would touch someone would that person also go insane? That is considering her curse isn't broken yet.

Also, please don't listen to the haters. I love your ASP stories and characters and would love to keep seeing more of this universe. We need a story featuring Kit the lioness! Please!

like i said beyond Great just to short lol.

Looking forward to seeing where the story with Nick goes, and Hunter and Mira, and and and :-) Love them all!

Another great chapter, can't wait for the next

Am I missing anything who the hell is Nickolas, is he that bartender? well anyways another great story chapter from you.

and I was also wondering will you do a story about Jade and Dominic from ASP? It was just a question you don't have to do it if you don't want to.

I loved the question at the end about protection! It is obvious that she was able to have children before and if this is the man to break the curse why wouldn't he be able to knock her up. But if it is just for the sheer remembering reality after hot sex it was worth it.

One of the best and most awaited chapter in this series. Bravo for a job well done!

this story is great. i'd love to hear more about nicky and arielle, as well as mira and hunter! (:

Nick Stavaros, I remember, was in an earlier work you did. I thought he was with...Rayne's mom [From Blood Rayne, but I think you changed the name]. I'm dying to know what that orange liquid was about, and seemingly sweethearts like Arielle, but I'm thinking something is wrong with her...This chapter was amazing, your love scenes are some of the best. I also loved the question at the end, usually that's at the beginning of sex...

Loved this chapter....sooooooo HOT!!!...i still in shock..hehe ( a good one tho)...btw who the hell is Nicky...hmm maybe i missed a chapt or sumthing..oh well who cares...lol...lovely job

Great chapter, really hot. I loved it. And that little twist in the end was just what it needed!

MissWizz

Fallen into my passive reader mode again, sorry! I'm still voting and enjoying though >.<

<3

Ha ha! You finally give us the beautiful sex scene and then comes the drama again all in one paragraph!

youd think a condom would have been the first thing on her mind since she always protected her skin. do i smell a baby

It truly amazes me how you go from drama to sex and action and then suddenly ZING comedy ! I’m still chuckling as I write this