All Comments on 'Hunting Cabin'

Worked well with my cousin after I became a cop, she loves the uniform and is kind of submissive. Occasional meet up even after 18 years. I love her.

no girl would ever stay after he attacked her from behind and cuffed her. once she was free she would leave and tell all the relatives what happened then never talk to him again. keep it believable or put it in the fantasy area total bullshit as usual for this site

i wish my cousins and my hunting season could be that great. did he taste salty or sweet, we need a chapter 2, 3, 4, ...

I think you should explain your insecurities as to why she thought he wouldn't want her. Also, if you described each character in basic form. You don't have to describe your breast size or his cock, but it would be nice to know their ages, etc. Why did she have to leave? You didn't say whether she was married.

Looking forward to Chapter 2