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She lay her shirts on the top of the pack and closed the flap, cinching it tightly.
She looked around the empty room and listened to the now oddly familiar sound of clicking claws and soft murmurs and growls coming from the hallway. Her grin came back. Yes, it was going to be really, really, really rough.
She'd see to that personally.
- COMMENTS
nthusiasticover 7 years agoOf the annoyance of typos and the misuse of homonyms, dear Anony, and I agree completely however I beg to differ with you about your suggestion. An editor isn't needed here precisely because Enithermon is such a good writer. A beta reader or proofreader would catch those little boo-boos, such as using 'where' instead of 'were'.
Editors, at least the good ones, focus more on plot and pacing. That is precisely where Enithermon does NOT need assistance. I'm loving this, especially all the snarky thoughts running through Ina's head. "Tell me I didn't just say that out loud!" Priceless! I love it!
Anonymousalmost 8 years agoYour a realy good storyteller, but you're many mistakes are to distracting.
Mallyseabout 12 years agoI like this character so much! I just love a strong female heroine and she's witty and sexy too! Her self-confidence doesn't come off arrogant. Again, very well written... kudos!
Anonymousabout 12 years agoi stumbled on this story and now i am reading the entire series instead of writing my essay for class.
you write phenomenally!
