by Enithermon
THIS STORY IS GREAT! I CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE. HOW DOES SHE REACT TO THE LAST LINE? DOES HE TELL HER? HOW WILL THE HUNTERS REACT WHEN THEY FIND THE OTHERS? SUCH BIG QUESTIONS TO LEAVE US HANGING ON! MORE SOON PLEASE! THANKS FOR SHARING THIS STORY.
This story is one of the BEST that I have read- absolutely love it- keep writing! Can't wait for the next chapter!
ur right. it was a slow start...but DOES it ever satisfy! was never one to find mixing species hot but this was shit hot! just hot! you are by far one of my faves on this sight. like really up there. you are super talented and never keep us waiting too long.
I love this store and I am desperately looking forward to more I hope soon please! Great job!
Love reading ur work. Ina is a great character & I love the banter btwn her & Feric. I also can't wait to see the roles the other characters will play esp her sister. This has to be one of the best on this site. I know ur busy livin ur life, but please don't take too long posting the next chapter.
This is a great story, extremely well written with awesome characters. I hope there will be further installments!
Having read and loved Fire and now reading this one, I have to say huge fan. You write sex, humour, action all soooo well and I'm a huge fan for it.
I love this story. Please update it soon! I'm dying for more!
I absolutely adore this lovestory between Feric and Inanna. How nice to have a female resourceful and with spunk!
Just as nice is it that the male character, although massive in build seems to be so very sexy but without letting his maleness hanging out!
Just hope you will hurry up with the finishing chapters, I get so tired of looking up earlier stories and they never get finished!
Keep up the good writing!
Leaving the chapter like that and then not posting the next. We haven't even meet the bad guy yet. Mean I tell you. Please post the next chapter. I love your writing style and humor not to mention your wonderfull charactors.
I've recently discovered this series and I'm loving it. Please, please, please update soon.
Please post more chapters this is an excellant story on par with evil alpaca's work!
Other than the occasional spelling error, excellent!
Especially for one who has played Oblivion... :)
No words are enough to describe this chapter and the rest of your work.
Thank you for sharing it with us .
I looked forward to reading this chapter all day at work, it didn't disappoint.
But please fix the spelling of quiet. A place that is silent is not quite, it is quiet.
Really really do. But was so annoyed that with that story of the Dunmer getting their black skin as "curse".