All Comments on 'Hurrah for the Pirate King'

by Sir Galahad

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
*SIGHS*

Now I would definately love to have a man like Harry. Very good story.

Traveller_1955Traveller_1955over 18 years ago
Hip, Hip, Hurrah !!!!!!!!

This is one of the very best stories I have ever read here. A real story line. Characters one liked. The sex was interesting and appropriate.

A story worth a second read.

The Traveller

kromenkromenover 18 years ago
This is why I log on

Truthfully, I almost backed out of reading it when i saw it was seven pages. I'm so glad I stayed the course. It was a great read. Even though a work of fiction, you did enough research to make it very factual, which i appreciated. Keep writing.

K.R

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
very heart warming

loved this story

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Great

What a super story this is! As good as Little Miss Marker.

Boyd

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Wonderful

One of the best conventional stories I have read here. Only one very minor comment that it is rare for men to need extra iron, and in fact most men (and post-menopausal women) should avoid iron supplements. A lack of iron gnenerally means something much more serious is going on.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
great!

excellent...wonderful...terrific

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Great!

Excellent story, good character development with a believable plot line. Keep it up!

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Magical !

A truly grand story. One that you should not start late at night, (as I did), because you do not want to 'finish it in the morning', you read on. Just so good.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Incredible!

Please please PLEASE write more like this. This is better than most of the crap I have to choose to buy from at the local bookstore that's written by supposedly great authors. absolutely wait for the right inspiration, but continue please

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Indeed, you are.

When it comes to writing, you are indeed "the" Sir Galahad. A gorgeous story, well described, combining some of the best of both cultures. One of the best narratives read anywhere.

knightofheartsknightofheartsalmost 16 years ago
I salute you

A John D. MacDonald reference. Hurrah. I salute you good sir.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Best story on Literotica

This tribute is long in coming, but uneviquivocal. I've been owing you this for a while. After reading thousands of stories, this remains my overall favorite. I love your characterization, your writing style, everything about it. I only wish you had written more stories. They couldn't be better, but I could hope for an equal. Not yet found it.

Thanks forever. Ole Joe

WoodButcher57WoodButcher57over 15 years ago
Great Story Telling as Usual,

But just one question--------What does 3/4 mean?

bbellows02bbellows02over 14 years ago
The Best!

I thank you Sir for the excellent story. The best I have ever read. Thank You.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
oh my god

this is easily the best story i've ever read thay wasn't a series, and it places really high on the all time list. Thanks for the amazing story.

16gauge16gaugealmost 14 years ago
What a Pirate King

I started the story on a whim, got caught up and had to finish it. I really liked the way it progressed, no rushing, no wham bam thank you mam. It told a very good story. Thank you

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Great!

As is all your work. Thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Hurrah for Sir Galahad!

You're always getting well-deserved kudos for your works (and rightfully so). This is another grand slam right out of the stadium!

Even Ole Joe signed in with congrats. Some heavy duty praise that is.

I don't know how you do it, but for me this is your best effort to date. And yes, much of my accolades are partly because the belly dancing genie/pirate master romance is my personal quirk.

This tale could not have been written better!

Yes, you've done it again and set the standard that others will be fortunate equal.

OLDWARRIOROLDWARRIORover 10 years ago
Gadzooks!

A truly wonderous tale , Messers Gilbert and Sullivan 3would totally aspprove .

Mountain_TayMountain_Tayover 10 years ago
Awestruck

Full-bodied, well-writen, and displays a marvelous romance without sacrificing pasionet sex and character growth. Truly, well done.

Boyd PercyBoyd Percyabout 10 years ago
Still Great

I first read this story on January 5, 2006 and left a comment then. I still enjoyed it today as much as the first time.

Boyd

duetbetterduetbetterover 8 years ago
Pirates of Penzance, No. 1

Slight correction-- the opening line of Pirates is "pour, oh pour the pirate sherry", not "drink, oh drink" (:

Thanks for the story.

Admiralbird348Admiralbird348almost 8 years ago
Superb!

This is a great story and you are a wonderful storyteller!

Thank you:))

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

Rani may have been born in the U.S., but...

She is an Indian!

For she might have been a Russian, or a Frank or Turk or Prussian,

(or e’en Italian!)

OR E’EN ITALIAN!

But as she herself has said it, and it’s greatly to her credit,

She remains an Indian, she remains an Indian!

SHE REMAINS AN INDIAN!

Gilbert and Sullivan aside, just what does “¾“ have to do with anything, anyway?

Sir GalahadSir Galahadover 6 years agoAuthor
What does "3/4" have to do with anything?

When I imported the story from Word to Literotica, for some arcane reason the m-dashes came across as the "3/4" symbol. It is a glitch that Microsoft fixed in later versions of Word. I am not sure how to fix it in Literotica, so I am leaving it well enough alone. That's all.

pjpbpjpb6 months ago

5/5

The only remark: category - Romance would be a better match; Interracial is a bit confusing, most stories there is essentially mixed race erotic coupling; this one is a romance with additional cultural spicing

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I believe that it is possible to write erotica that has a plot; that erotica, properly crafted, can be an art form. Sex should be part of the plot, not just the object of the exercise, in anything other than a short intended to incite lust. I'm pleased that people out there e...