by Sir Galahad
Now I would definately love to have a man like Harry. Very good story.
This is one of the very best stories I have ever read here. A real story line. Characters one liked. The sex was interesting and appropriate.
A story worth a second read.
The Traveller
Truthfully, I almost backed out of reading it when i saw it was seven pages. I'm so glad I stayed the course. It was a great read. Even though a work of fiction, you did enough research to make it very factual, which i appreciated. Keep writing.
K.R
One of the best conventional stories I have read here. Only one very minor comment that it is rare for men to need extra iron, and in fact most men (and post-menopausal women) should avoid iron supplements. A lack of iron gnenerally means something much more serious is going on.
Excellent story, good character development with a believable plot line. Keep it up!
A truly grand story. One that you should not start late at night, (as I did), because you do not want to 'finish it in the morning', you read on. Just so good.
Please please PLEASE write more like this. This is better than most of the crap I have to choose to buy from at the local bookstore that's written by supposedly great authors. absolutely wait for the right inspiration, but continue please
When it comes to writing, you are indeed "the" Sir Galahad. A gorgeous story, well described, combining some of the best of both cultures. One of the best narratives read anywhere.
A John D. MacDonald reference. Hurrah. I salute you good sir.
This tribute is long in coming, but uneviquivocal. I've been owing you this for a while. After reading thousands of stories, this remains my overall favorite. I love your characterization, your writing style, everything about it. I only wish you had written more stories. They couldn't be better, but I could hope for an equal. Not yet found it.
Thanks forever. Ole Joe
But just one question--------What does 3/4 mean?
I thank you Sir for the excellent story. The best I have ever read. Thank You.
this is easily the best story i've ever read thay wasn't a series, and it places really high on the all time list. Thanks for the amazing story.
I started the story on a whim, got caught up and had to finish it. I really liked the way it progressed, no rushing, no wham bam thank you mam. It told a very good story. Thank you
You're always getting well-deserved kudos for your works (and rightfully so). This is another grand slam right out of the stadium!
Even Ole Joe signed in with congrats. Some heavy duty praise that is.
I don't know how you do it, but for me this is your best effort to date. And yes, much of my accolades are partly because the belly dancing genie/pirate master romance is my personal quirk.
This tale could not have been written better!
Yes, you've done it again and set the standard that others will be fortunate equal.
A truly wonderous tale , Messers Gilbert and Sullivan 3would totally aspprove .
Full-bodied, well-writen, and displays a marvelous romance without sacrificing pasionet sex and character growth. Truly, well done.
I first read this story on January 5, 2006 and left a comment then. I still enjoyed it today as much as the first time.
Boyd
Slight correction-- the opening line of Pirates is "pour, oh pour the pirate sherry", not "drink, oh drink" (:
Thanks for the story.
This is a great story and you are a wonderful storyteller!
Thank you:))
Rani may have been born in the U.S., but...
She is an Indian!
For she might have been a Russian, or a Frank or Turk or Prussian,
(or e’en Italian!)
OR E’EN ITALIAN!
But as she herself has said it, and it’s greatly to her credit,
She remains an Indian, she remains an Indian!
SHE REMAINS AN INDIAN!
Gilbert and Sullivan aside, just what does “¾“ have to do with anything, anyway?
When I imported the story from Word to Literotica, for some arcane reason the m-dashes came across as the "3/4" symbol. It is a glitch that Microsoft fixed in later versions of Word. I am not sure how to fix it in Literotica, so I am leaving it well enough alone. That's all.
5/5
The only remark: category - Romance would be a better match; Interracial is a bit confusing, most stories there is essentially mixed race erotic coupling; this one is a romance with additional cultural spicing