Hurricane Ch. 01

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"I'll always be yours," she whispered to the morning air, finding the words she couldn't only a moment ago.

"I'll always be yours."

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Alpha_MarmAlpha_Marmover 10 years ago
Universal love pain and sacrifice

This first part wrenched my heart out of my chest. I know this pain of sacrifice...always giving up for the greater good. Why are women so accustomed to doing this? Is it a gene or in how we're raised? In either case, it still hurts like

HELL!!!

You touched a nerve...... a scar thought healed over. Thank you.

brownskinnedcutiebrownskinnedcutieover 11 years ago

His father is racist scum, sucking pig who should be drawn and quartered!! She's stupid but I hope that she gets her brains back sooner rather than later.

wenbiwenbiover 11 years ago
Awesome beginning!

I'm already hooked! Hope that you will continue this story. Great job so far.

MsKrcsMsKrcsabout 13 years ago
Dayum!!!!

LOVE IT!!!!!!

erm...do ya fink u can sorta do a follow up story?....plzzzzzz :D

This story was DEEP! I had to rate it five stars!!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
omg so emotional like the land version of titanic

they hav to end up together omg this story is awesome and needs many more chapters!!

brilliant xxxx

mariasmdmariasmdover 13 years ago
??!!!!!

OMG! shit i think my computer might fry, i cant stop shedding tears all over it!

this was so sweet and tragic! please, please don't leave it like this! please right more. i feel so human after reading this; very well written!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Speechless *****

C8er2u,

I love all your stories, please continue with the great work and your vision. I have all three of your new stories and they leave me breathless and speechless, your creativity with story lines will have me coming back for more and will your biggest fan.

Do not change any of your stories unless it fit with the end game:)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
DAAAMNN!!!!

AHH!! noo you cant end it there D: this story is amazing soo cute. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!

honeybreehoneybreealmost 14 years ago
Whoa intense and full of depth, simply wonderful

First, I love the setting and plot, being a New Orleans native and living through Katrina I must say you got the feelings of the situation on point and the things that came about from it with lost and searching, but loving these two Alex and Sean are just to intense, hot and yummy for their own good. This story is amazing, can't wait to read more about it

cantfightfatecantfightfatealmost 14 years ago
Wow.

That was intense. I hope you follow up with this!

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