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All Comments on 'Hurry Up or We'll Miss the Show'

by idoit2myself

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drksideofthemoondrksideofthemoonover 18 years ago
Not too bad...

I thought it was pretty good.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Shows Promise

Parts of it seemed rushed, but the style and idea was good. It felt real, but not told as well as it could have been.

Keep writing, though...just expand a little more.

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