All Comments on 'Hypnotic Ch. 04'

Oh my god! Damn! >.< Did NOT see this coming, this, maybe, has to be, the best in this series.. I dunno, just the way that Ellis responded--- awesome. *sobs* DLKSFJSLKDJFSDf OMG I want more :(

I LOVE THIS STORY YOU HAVE TO POST THE NEXT CHAPTER FAST PLEASSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSE CAN'T WAIT YOU THE BEST

CANN'T WAIT TELL UNTIL NEXT ONE PLZ HAVE IT OUT SOON AND PLZ HAVE IT LIKE 5 PAGES LONG THANK U AND KEEPING GOING

You are sooooo cruel to cut if off like that :) this is getting beter and better. More please and soon, I cant take the suspense.

but you are a meany for leaving us so on edge. Fingers crossed for the big reveal and my happy ending.

I love it! Especially the "not instant happiness" part - I'd lost all hope that someone would pick up that idea and started writing myself, but you did a wonderful job!

I always love your writing! But way to make me cry then leave us hanging!!! Great job. I look forward to more soon!

Love it and can't wait to see what is going on with Isaiah and his mystery friend and to find out if it is Dav or Ellis doing the blocking hmm???

Dav really blew it. All the talk about trust had me wondering. Interesting twist with the twin :) Very interesting.

How could Dav do that to his mate? I thought Carthera had ways to feel each others' minds and know their thoughts, which Dav should've been able to do to determine that Ellis was innocent. He really messed this up. I hope there is a logical explanation for Isiah too and the people he's bringing to meet Ellis aren't dangerous.

Very exciting. I can't wait to see what brings Dav and Ellis back together but I'm thinking something like Isiah's "friend" is really his mate and that's his surprise for Ellis. Being that they are mates is why Isiah is doing all those horrible things and he probably thinks its for the best because he's been manipulated. When they find out that Ellis is Dav's mate they kidnap him or some sort and then Dav has to come rescue him this ensuing that their bond isn't broken and a happily ever after. But that's just my guess.

Great job can't wait for the next chapter

xoxo

C.

Love this story :) but I'm still pissed that out of everyone only Dr Pannar at least gave Ellis the benefit of the doubt. I mean yes they were trying to protect the other cathera but still...

I feel so bad for Ellis -- I can't stand it! I hope you are able to post soon and we can have a happy ending. Not sure if that is possible though with how hurt Ellis is. I feel like I know your characters and can feel their pain! Please hurry with the next chapter - fingers crossed that things are gonna be ok for Ellis & Dav.

I love this chapter and all you packed into it and can't wait for more. I love how the stories were all pulled together in this chapter letting us see the thread running through them all from a higher vantage point. I really feel badly for Ellis. To be attacked like that, I was wincing inside imagining how that would feel after opening your heart, mind, body and soul to someone and have them act like that. He is right to be so angry. Afterall, Dav didn't say 'Let me see the evidence--I don't believe this about him' or even if he felt that he didn't know his mate well enough, he still should have given him the benefit of the doubt. That said, I think Dav has had a rough life and I think he probably was so affected by this appearance of love in his life which he never experienced that his fear of losing it could have pushed him into being stupid. I hope Ellis will realize that though I think he should make Dav squirm and beg for forgiveness. I also don't get how Dav, no matter how angry, could be ready to attack his own mate. Doesn't the Cathera bond with a mate prevent the person from hurting their mate. Wouldn't it be impossible to cause them pain, let alone attack them and cause them bodily harm?

I think that Ellis isn't fully human. I also think that he may be holding their bond closed b/c I think Dav would be opening it again if he could being so desperate to talk to him. I think Dav would have hunted him down by now or maybe be watching. I know that Dr. Panaar didn't say a bond couldn't be severed, but I think he doesn't want to make assertions about the snakes who he doesn't know all that much about. I pray that Ellis doesn't go off without anyone knowing...of course he will I am sure...and have his brother put him in danger. I don't trust the bastard.

I'm pretty mad at Dav right now :) hope you can make him grovel enough and prove he's worth Ellis' love again. I'm not sure how I can feel about him after he did that. And then when he tried to go to Ellis like it was all forgotten. That was crazy. The strange thing is that he said 'you're in pain' which how would he have picked that up if his side of the bond were shut down. It seemed like it was more than a physical cue that made him say it. Well, you really kicked ass in this chapter and I hope you can keep raising the bar!! Post soon please! I can't wait for more!

the one thing I am having trouble with now that I went back to reread some parts is that when the mate bond took, they both saw into each other's memories. Why didn't Dav realize that he didn't see anything in Ellis' mind about working with the enemies, etc. I mean, if Ellis saw all of his dark side and he couldn't hide it then how could a human have hidden this stuff from him? I think Dr. Panaar or some Carthera in the room should have pointed that out.

Lots of GREAT comments! Thanks to everyone loving the story. I am posting the next chapter today, so 3-5 days for it to be approved and you'll have more. Let's see if I can hit a few questions/comments now!

Metajinx: I only give instant happiness on the rare occasion, lol!

Cliffgirl and Cannd: The memory thing will be addressed. :D

Chibicakes: That's an interesting idea. . .now you will have to wait and see if that's what happens! LOL, yes, I am that evil!

Anon: Well, in that room, Dr. Pannar has spent the most time with him. Dav should have been on his side, as his mate, but that obviously didn't happen. I think Velaku was at least entertaining doubts or expecting answers without freaking first. He's a good leader.

Cannd: I LOVE how you comment on my stories. There are so many things you get right, so many things you touch upon, and then some things I like seeing the way your mind went but they don't come into play in the story. Do you work with other writers? Because I have to say you'd be an awesome beta reader to plan plots with! You extrapolate so well.

Am loving your story! Controversially (I suspect), I feel really sorry for Dav more so than Ellis - he must have had such a bad life beforehand so he was waiting for Ellis to betray him, so it was so easy for him to think he had without asking questions first. I'm looking forward to seeing what is up with the bond being blocked and the headaches. I am hoping for a happy ending soon. Great job, can't wait to see what happens next xx

Am waiting for your next chapter with impatience... I have to say you know how to get your reader hooked.... :-)

Thanks for this story. I enjoy your work.

First off, I was very disappointed that you switched back to only having one POV. I would LOVE to see Dav's POV in this story, but then, I don't really like stories with only one POV. After all, there are always two sides to every story.

That said, I like this story. Hypnotic is captivating, erotic, and mysterious.

I really hope that Isiah isn't a bad guy. I hope, I hope, I hope.

Also... Is Isiah and Natham's brother going to be mates?

If Hypnotic follows the other Cathera stories, then I already know this will end happily, that Ellis will eventually forgive Dav.

Speaking of Ellis and Dav, I have a feeling that it is really Ellis keeping the bond closed.

Poor Dav, though. He sabotaged his growing relationship with Ellis because of his past, and now he's lost Ellis' trust. That's got to hurt. (I will state again that I'd love to have Dav's POV.)

Happy Writing,

~*Cyn*~