All Comments on 'I Am a Sex God'

by unremittingdesire

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
A Glitch

"very particular to his disrespect" doesn't make sense. I suspect this is a typo that accidentally created another word.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
best line:

Oh ye of little faith. I am an actual god of sex no less.

this is why you get a 5 without reading the rest

unremittingdesireunremittingdesireabout 6 years agoAuthor
Re: Glitch

After all these years I just now read this.

No this phrasing/spelling was intended. From my understanding of English conventions, particular in this context is used referring to the main character's disposition. When describing a person as particular (as far as I am aware. correct me if I am mistaken) it means someone who has very clear ideas about what they like and dislike and wants everything to be exactly as they like it.

ex: She’s very particular about what she eats.

The idea here is the sex god does not think the antagonizing agent is what he wants and is a impediment to how things should be. This was meant to be a silly framing for a serious situation.

By the way, do people want more of this story? I have not been actively writing since the feedback was mixed on the last chapter (#8).

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