All Comments on 'I Am Jack's Life Ch. 04'

Anyone interested in providing a detailed review or critique without waiting for Lit to finish posting the series should read this forum post:

http://forum.literotica.com/showthread.php?t=1 146071

Although the story content is not anything new but I find myself hooked and waiting for the next installment. I tried buying your book off amazon but apparently, visa or mastercards from my country are not accepted on amazon.com.

Your writing is very fluid and follows a pleasant pace. Looking forward to future chapters.

P.S I clicked on the link you provided (http://forum.literotica.com/showthread.php?t=1%20146071) and did not get what I was supposed to do

I really enjoy the depth of the charecters, and I feel like Jack is a good guy. I can't wait for the next update/installment.

It is quite apparent that Finis has thoroughly gone through this story for many hours of proofreading and editing. Very good, Finis. Kudos! Back in my day it was not unusual to go into marriage "untested" or a virgin. Regretfully so. Many issues dealing with sex and maturity are learned too late in life to make a stable relationship. Cheers!

between Jack and his friends.

interesting and very erotic. That first time reminds of another world...

Brought a genuine smile to my face.

Bravo for dreaming through to the best possible experience and learning path for a true nerd otherwise hopeless to find love and/or lust. I relate to Jack, and it's a huge joy to see all the right things fall into place. Very human, too. Thanks!!

A REALLY GOOD STORY SO FAR. A STORY WITH A LITTLE SEX INSTEAD OF ALOT OF SEX LOOKING FOR A STORY. SO MUCH MORE ENJOYABLE TO READ. I CAN'T PUT THIS STORY DOWN. I HOPE THE AUTHOR IS STILL WRITING AND READS MY COMMENT. IF THE REST OF THE STORY HOLDS TRUE TO FORM, I HOPE THE AUTHOR CAN DO A SEQUEL.

If only a group of girls such as this would have taken me in when I was that bullied high school nerd. My late teens and early 20s would have been so much easier.