All Comments on 'I Can Do This'

by Bert_Fegg

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tazz317tazz317over 10 years ago
FOR ONE TO HAVE COMPLETE CONFIDENCE

they must remember the only thing for certain one can do Is Die...and most of the time it is not their choice. TK U MLJ LV NV

patientleepatientleeover 10 years ago
Oh my.

This is powerful. I'm sitting here, letting it settle in. This belongs in Chicken Soup for the Soul or something. I started to cry halfway through.

Going back and forth from the mountain to off the mountain packed a powerful punch. Very well done.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
I had trouble discerning which "he" was being referred to in your story.

Duncan or Robert?

Too many he's, not enough names.

Or neither?

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Interesting, complex as is the topic.

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