by Deimos1
lets hope the laws are able to move into the new age, TK U MLJ LV NV
The very first paragraph tells you it's going to be about a cyber affair with a man the wife isn't married to. If it offends you so much why did you keep reading?
I do miss the chat rooms. If you are able to find the right woman it is so much fun for everyone. The story is accurate and good with the air of truth to it.
Very interesting I read not fictional but true stories, where ex husbands talked about they brought up children alone. The wives went to the cybersex mate, divorced the husband and the husbands got the children custody, because the ex wife did not want the children..............I think the husband should divorce quicklier so the wife could not escape from the children custody now............
Loved your story, hope to see some more, would like it to get more daring, will they meet ??
Interesting communications on line. Writing was excellent and kept my interest. Hope you do decide to continue. Thanks for writing and sharing.
The set up is a good chapter 1. I look forward to "the rest of the story".
I can almost see where this is going as can Josie. However, although the journey is inevitable, It is also compelling and I look forward to it's twists and turns.
Enjoyed the read.
Ain't it just freakin' short of amazing what can seem so real and hot in cyber world?
Even though I don't believe in the perfect story I gave it a 5 out of 5 anyways.
Looking forward to when she meets this guy face to face.
I want to be Josie. I found it so hot. I can not wait to read more. I am in lust with Kyle. Please describe him more.
This is authentic, real, visceral and believable. Well done!
To my male way of thinking, the initial process of getting Sweetie to stretch her tolerance limits was too fast and not very subtle. The Bull offered very little 'value' to Sweetie...if her neediness & neglect was THAT high, why was she so 'down' on other on-line males who wanted to 'be friendly' with her?
Time for Sweetie to join a gym...she will find horny, healthy guys before her first work-out is over!
3*
She is primed to be a hot wife, and she needs to meet this man that can control her with just his writing.
Can she imagine how powerful he would be if he was with her in person?
She wouldn't have any defences against him and would submit to him completely and not have any regrets about cheating on her husband, because if her husband would have been taking care of her needs, she wouldn't have to go to some other man to take care of her sexual needs.
Hope to see more.
Thanks for the read.
Think you have a winner.
She can meet him again ( online) and he'll cum for her.
Who will get on the cam first?
About Chapter 4 ...they will have to physically meet.
Good luck. Thanks Don
Great start to what could be a great series. I truly hope you continue this as a series.
I enjoyed this story a lot. Part of me wants a second chapter, and part of me says that it is perfect as it is, another chapter would either repeat the same things or might be a disappointment and 'jump the shark'. Whatever happens, this chapter is a great story.
As many others have said its enjoyable. To me its a sexy and rather sweet beginning. Who hasn't hesitated on the edge before taking that step into the unknown ? Would like to read more, thank you for an arousing piece of fantasy.
I love the buildup. Just the right pace to keep one reading and watching her struggle with the morality of her actions really leads to a sense that we know her.
Can't wait to read more!
Wow! Excellent opening. Very hot, erotic story. Please keep writing! I want to read what happens when they get together.
. . . as watching paint dry. Keyboarding is office work to me--hence BORING; or perhaps my carpal tunnel and arthritis is the reason I found this boring and unreadable.
hahahahahahahaha! WAY TOO MANY OF THESE STORIES ON THIS SITE.
Why does all of these stories have a loser husband. Or is that just the standard excuse for a heartless cunt wife. If hubby is so pathetic, why did she marry him. Just because he's a good provider. That's cold! and you never hear the other side (hubby's). Maybe she turned out to be a dead fuck. Maybe he's tired of doing all the work in bed. So she just uses the standard pathetic excuse that he's no good. This could have been hot if she still had great sex with hubby and they both liked the idea of her playing with other guys and in turn made their sex even hotter. Too bad this ain't it.
Hello Deimos,
Wonderful images were created from your narrative. This is great subject matter and love the expanding boundaries of a married woman. This is what makes a married woman so attractive. Will
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Didn't read this one soooo, no I don't want to read anything about acheap, lying, cheating, skank whore.
I loved Excite Virtual Places. I met my third wife there. I moved 600 miles and we married 6 months later. We had a great 14 years. I was one of these guys
YES, WRITE MORE!
You have a wonderful writing style.
Looking forward to reading more of your writings.