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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Sci-Fi & Fantasy?

Yeah, talking blood covered newborn babies and a succubus killing and eating her victims. Yeah, I can see how that works right into Sci-Fi & Fantasy and not Erotic Horror.

KrosisKrosisover 9 years agoAuthor
Oops

I accidentally submitted it with the wrong genre...I've resubmitted correctly, thanks.

WhackdoodleWhackdoodleover 9 years ago
A good story but one question:

Why would being killed by a Succubus result in eternal damnation. Assuming there is a hell with demons, then there would have to be a heaven with angels and there would have to be one ruler in each and rules for entrance.

What I'm wondering is: why would the victims, who had no choice in their actions, be forced to go to hell? That's like a rape victim going to prison because she was raped.

KrosisKrosisover 9 years agoAuthor
Whackdoodle

If you're referring to Abe, he was not a nice man. More info on that later.

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