by Samuelx
Your ability to write is good. Your descriptive prowess of something beyond the internal monologuing of the obviously over-inflated ego of the main character however, is lacking. This detracts from the fap material it could have been. Nothing ruins a boner, or a juicy peach more than every other line being about how awesome you are.
with this. Whenever Samuelx posts, simply ignore it. Don't read it. The mod must surely be aware how distasteful we find this "author's" work.
I take great exception to the last comment,Sweeny Todd,I am running out of meat for my pies
How u doing sambo,not to well by the looks of it ,try arse fucking an angry gorilla,lets face it he is closer related to you than I am ,I would be interested to know how you get on.
Your 500+ short, abusive, disrespectful, obnoxious, and form written submissions in a very, very short period of time have RUINT what had been a very good erotic tale web site. The owners of this web site and the webmaster of this site need to be an immediate stop to your submissions. Your are some kind of young psychotic person who is about to commit some horrendous acts in the near future, if someone does not stop you very, very soon!