All Comments on 'I Got it Right the First Time'

by BrettJ

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ambush184ambush184over 10 years ago
good story

I was left wanting more though.

RoguesladyRoguesladyover 10 years ago
Yet again

Another well written story. I could picture it in my head as it happened.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Boring for the previous commenter?

Poor guy's probably wanking away to a cuck story right now.

Nice story, keep writing them like this and I'll keep reading.

5*

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
sounds like a tale

this sounds like a tale I heard. oh yes I remember, meet a girl in tenth grade.

we became a item. married the end of 12 grade, that was 45 years ago.

still together, she was my first and I was her first. some people have a

normal marriage like we have. true to each other.

northlandernorthlanderover 10 years ago
Good story

Nicely written story about a different style of loving wife and husband. Good romance, which is what people look for in that style. A refreshing story compared to the tripe that has been prevalent on Lit for a while.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Very good story

Double dates can have unusual endings. Some times things do turn out well from the beginning

chocolatesistachocolatesistaover 10 years ago
BEautiful

A true love story, wow

SampkyangSampkyangabout 8 years ago
That is just the way love is supposed to be

IF there is a desire to share or experience another in bed then there is no

REAL love in your marriage even if you deny the truth.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago

Good story, but I’m confused. If he drove the four of them to the restaurant on his and Tracy’s first date, why, later on, did he and Jasmine take a cab to her house? What the heck, did Cory steal his date and his car?!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
A Nifty Short Story!

Nicely done! (I still think he should have put a beating on Cory!)

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
What bullshit!

Prior to their date he had no interest in Jasmine. So he marries her because she offers to helped pay for their dinner? If Tracy was interested in Cory she would have dated him before this point in time. They were all in high school together. I can still remember every beautiful girl in my high school and that was 47 years ago.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Nice enjoyable story, not to much heat but good enough to like it.

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