All Comments on 'I Hate You'

My idea of a perfect love story..........it had a lot of things to say....and I surely mean metaphorically.

Oh my god! Squeal! Was indeed the most perfect and gorgeous thing i have ever seen on here. justin is about the cutest thing in existance!

That was absolutely the best thing I've read on this site.

The characters were actually developed and real, and their emotions were genuinely, well, genuine. Your writing is amazing. I was completely enthralled.

A quick "sex for the sake of sex" is fun occasionally, but I wish there was more literotica like this.

Beautiful.

wow that was a fantastic love story. I really loved your charactors. Thank you for sharing :)

that story was so awesome!!!! it was tugging at my heart strings the whole way through!!!!

Thank you. That was beautiful.

your story is soo sweet, makes me wanna hug them both :)

but the title caught me and then the writing drew me in. The use of body language, of what it can say about emotions was so well done to be almost literary genius. Amazingly well written, great voice, fantastic characters and enough emotion to bring a tear.

I have never liked a story in this category but I loved this story. The characters and the tension and romance was amazing. I loved it.

I was on edge from the start. I was in a relationship like that for 2.5 years, and it is still going. I never usually cry reading stories such as these, but this one did it. Great job on all of the story and setting it up...it was awesome and am looking foreward to more of ur writing!! Keep it up...can't wait to read more!!! thanx.

Loved it. great love story that had me crying at the end.

A lovely read! Thank you!

Ow! So sweet! I've loved it!

Rapousa

I loved this story...

In fact I loved it so much I'm thinking of useing it as the storylilne for my comic.

if you allow it that is.

- Elo

<3

I love that it wasn't just porn, it was so romantic :D

This was a very enriching story. You used 2 different spellings of the main character's name though, an absolutely minor detail in comparison to the beauty of this story. Very well done!

Justin and Brian... Lol

I really enjoyed this story. Sweet and romantic, and well written. Thanks for the smile you brought, as well as a little bit of heart racing. :)

boo it fuckin sucked

Dunno...didn't like it much.

Wow! Just when I thought I couldn't be touched by reading a story from Literotica; you proved me wrong with this wonderfully crafted story. It pulled me in and had me adoring Justin....although by the description, I typically wouldn't have been attracted.

This story pulled at my heart strings and made me smile. I am hoping you have other stories to share. I haven't checked yet....I had to render my comments as soon as I finished reading the story.

BRAVO!

I enjoyed this story. It was short but I enjoyed it and i thought the body language Dialog was cool too.

Interested in reading more from you :-)

Happy Writing !

That was adorable. I was practically crying along with Justin, poor guy... I loved the body language. The whole thing was just amazing.

Ok. So I totally read this story years ago on another site (I think anyway) and wasn't even looking for it here and just stumbled across it! I haven't re-read it yet (it's so late and I have to get to bed), but I read Justin's half (that side was new....I think, lol). Nice job.

I hate you for writing such a beautiful story......... It's funny I read Justins side before reading this and that was over a couple of months back if that's even right English lol.

Loved it , just to say.

Clueless, cute airhead but so caring once he gets the point, can't help loving every minute of reading this story, this is my third time around. It's priceless and gets even better after reading the other half of the story.

...that's enough, right? Body language! :)

It made me cry. I've liked all of your stories that I've read so far.. but this one truly has been the best.. I've not even read the second part yet.. Thank you!

I think the silent conversation was hot!

I loved the story and found amazing when Bryan finally fathomed the new language that had been spoken between the two of them - he had been deaf to this nonverbal communication, having been so swamped with speech ...

Justin is a wonderful character, such an original - those glasses he wore, from the 60's ? Really ? Why such glasses? I guess his personality allowed his quirkiness.

Thanx for sharing this wonderful story.

artisticbiguy, you are undoubtedly a gifted, skillful writer. The dialogue, personalities and descriptions in this first half of "I Hate You" were real, believable, fun, and satisfying from the first word to the last. Especially I enjoyed that this was written with sensitivity and 'good taste' with plenty of humor. I wish you had an endless list of gay creative stories. Unfortunately, I have only Justin's half of this one still to read, but most likely I'll read them again later. Thanks for all you've written and posted in Literotica.

I love the story and your writing and i get it was necessary for thr i hate you moment but it bothers me he fucked that slut. Dunno maybe cuz im not bi. I dunno it bugs me for some reason.

I honestly don't get these stories. Guy crushes on someone, refuses to say anything about it, and is then angry at that person for not reading his mind. No one should have to 'come out' before they are ready. But they damn sure can't expect someone else to figure it out, make the first move, and then apologize for not doing it sooner. That's just ridiculous.

Not to mention the fact that stories like this make it seem like homosexuality is just some choice to be made.

Beautifully written. Character development was great. Touched my heart. Great love story. Thanks for taking the time and effort to write it.

I loved this story. You write with such clarity and sensitivity. I will revisit this.