All Comments on 'I Have Always Loved My Father'

Mixed feelings. A sad ending to what may have been a beautiful tale of wonder.

Very beautifully told, and very well written. But the narrator's decision at the end was ill-conceived. A person of healthy psychology may have confronted her father, or perhaps at worse, move out before he could have a chance to explain. Instead, committing suicide on a dime like that, Nila comes across as fragile and neurotic. A tragic outcome, to be sure, but it does not speak well for the protagonist to be so brittle. Still, it's a very well told story, and I hope not the last that we'll see from you.

By the end, I loved your story, and hated it as well.

Beautiful, nevertheless.

Nicely told and so very different from the same old -same old . An odd but understandable ending .

that was horrible omg

i wish i wouldn't have read your story now :[

you shouldn't have killed her!

it was a good story but then again it wasn't

idk

This was a very good - no great story compared to all the others i've read so far. Even though I would have liked a happy ending, I love the current ending because of the twist and how it fits the storyline and character as well.

Well told story. This was very good - hope to see more of your work.

i cant believe you killed her and her baby. thats so fucked up. but i loved the entire story. i just wish you hadnt killed her. why not just have her leave forever. im bawling my eyes out and i never cry.

good story but why did you kill her? that just isnt fair.

Although I am a sucker for the romantic and happy endings, the tragic and sad ones tug at my heart and sadly seem to be much truer to what life often seems to deal us. Can honestly say this is the only story on lit I have ever read that made me cry. Although I of course wish it had had a happy ending you did warn us fair and square, and to those who didn't like the ending... You were warned!

Beautifully written. I can feel her love and her despair, able to relate to her plight. Very well done.

you should have just let her run away. so sad, so beautiful. i knew going in it would be sad, but it broke my heart! good job :)

Yes a real read here awesome work thank you lass

i've been personally thinking about committing suicide because of feelings for my own father. i know they'll never be expressed, and i've already written a few notes and contemplated the less painful ways to die. thank you for writing this. i truly connected with the protagonist in this story.

First to the user below DO NOT kill yourself. Don't ......talk to your father about it I know he'd rather you tell him then to find you dead. I have tried to kill myself 4 to 5 times and I know how much it would hurt my families feeling and have them feel as though they have failed as a parent just don't ok find another way. Second this story made me cry I loved it I have been looking for a good father/ daughter story for 2 months and haven't found one until today. All the others are based on lust yours is pure love and I thank you for giving me a good father and daughter story and I loved the fact that it was a sad ending most are happy this is different. Could you do me a favor and try to help some of these other sorry excuse for writers on here. I have met talented people on this site but 85% of them lack true talent and its sad. I hate it when they make the daughter into a whore and have her disgusting self parading around the house have naked that kills me. I can't read it thank you for making the daughter a classy and passionate love she didn't have to be a whore to get him she poured her heart out to him. but with tragic endings. oh and thanks for not making the father a pervert like many pathetic writers on here.5 stars

I mostly come to this sight for extremely sexual stories, and I didn't think I'd like this one much. But the characters flowed so well, and were so well developed it's hard not to. It was extremely sad, which I personally am a fan of (for some reason unbeknownst to me, i love tragedies,) but even though it was gut-wrenching how sad this story was, I'm not crying. There have been a few scenes in shows or a few stories that are like that for me. I want to cry, but can't, and won't until the like the fourth time I watch or read them. Anyway, I appreciate good things, no matter what genre, or who made them. As long as they're good I like them. And this story is easily one of the best. 5/5

Incredible

I really loved the story, but I had to shut down the website when Nila's father found her dead. I was so shoked. I am a writher too, although I don't write any sex stories. I know in the real life it's difficult too, but why don't you make a new chapter in were you describe that he finds Nila almost dead, but he reanimates her. Then he brings her to the hospital. The doctors say she is in a coma and will probably not get out of it fast, but a week later because her father keeps singing to her she does. Trust this has happened before... In the real life. And then go further on the wedding and the baby boy. It doesn't have to be so tragic, with all her feelings about committing suicide it is tragic enough. Don't shock people to their very core! So maybe follow my advice, make another chapter with a happier ending. You have a lot of talent for writing, and I would love to read that version! The reason I got to read this story was because I grew up without a father and I've always been dreaming about how he'd be like and how the bonds would feel like and via links I got on this website and found this story that answered how I would want my own father to be.

This is hot, dark, sexy, and tragic all in one go.

I fucking love it.

i don't know if i'm strange or what but this is the 1st story made me cry in this site

Maybe there was a switch or something (it wasn't well defined) but I didn't understand how dad's movements around the house were told to us by a dead woman in the garage. Guess it's a from beyond the grave narration but it wasn't made firm enough for understanding.

For the rest. Author's choice of course and there was a fair warning. Creating deeply likable characters then having them brutalized in the end are just some writer's thing. They really twist the knife in at the end using over dramatic events.

Certainly welcome to grow a garden full of misery if you like. And you are certainly an exceptional enough gardener to grow any damn thing you wish. Perhaps a little more nuance with a little less misery could open some new challenges and open horizons for you while bringing in new readership.

You can certainly write an emotional drama with characters whose rough demise emotionally cripples the readership. The comments proved it.

I'm curious what else you've got. You've obviously mastered this style so maybe another more challenging (to you) story type would benefit you and your overall skills.

A very good story, except for the twelve inch cock that she could deep throat as a virgin 18 year old... and the melodramatic suicide. You can't please everyone, but I really liked it other than these two details.

Being a crazy psycho doesn't really match well with graduating with honors from Princeton in three years... you do have a talent for writing, it just needs a bit of impartial editing.

This was the best story I have ever read, bar none. There is no sense going any further.

Jesus Christ man!! I loved your story and at the same time I hate it. Could have been a epic love story, but you warned us . Jesus Christ man!!

Intense and passionate! Thank you...

OH MY GOD

This was the most emotional and heartbreaking story I've ever read.

outstanding..just outstanding.😢

balling my eyes out... written so well, but, oh God... so horrifically sad... if he knew her so well, why didn't he see the jealousy, especially after she asked him if he was having an affair? What was she to think? She tried when she was 18, why wouldn't she do it again? I don't even know what to say... powerful! (this would make one hell of a movie, for sure)

So sad.