by lilmisssmartypants
Hated this story. What a pathetic, weak man. He blames her for her misgivings and gets his revenge for something he fucking did. He was a racist and an idiot. He cheated on her. Hurt and abused her physically and mentally while they had a relationship. She turned on him, pasting over the campus the supposed letter that hurt his business. So fucking what? If he had a good business, one source shouldn't have cost him his business. Besides, it wasn't her who cost him that source of income. It was his own prejudice that did. Good for her if she posted those letters. So this story is about a victim, being victimized again by an asshole, big, strong man that he is...gagging. He's not a man. He's not a man, blaming everybody else for his problems. Poor baby.
You're writing was very good and believable. While I'm not sure I "got off" on the content that is my fault for reading a story in the non-consent catagory. I thought you did a very good job developing your characters and the story flowed well. At times I felt like I was there in the SUV. Keep up the good work.
Or is is WHAT? A MAN?
Obviously a rapist cannot claim to be a MAN
What's the deal with some of these comments? Why are these people choosing to read a story in the "non-consent" category, only to diss the story for being about non-consent? Doesn't that seem just a little bit stupid?
- I'm giving it a five even though I didn't really 'love it', mostly because of the quality.
I do wonder though - what was the point at the end, about the flyers?
I'm not sure what the other posters are complaining about the badguy in this NC story is despicable and devious which is why he's the badguy in an NC story. The descriptions the scene and the main character's ineer turmoi are what make this story hot! hot! hot!
lilmisssmartypants please keep writing!
As NC stories go, this was one of the best. The characters are believable and have real motivations and their reactions seem genuine. I enjoyed the victim's mixed emotions--she hates him, but after all, he remembers what she enjoys and is able to make her respond. yummy. . .
I absolutely loved it! Very well written! It is something I will dream about for weeks! Keep writing!
This was written incredibly well, five stars for you! You managed to capture all the right emotions and sensations beautifully! I hope to read more from you in the near future!