All Comments on 'I Love Halloween'

I feel for this man. This story brought tears to my eyes. I know what it's like to be lonely, on the outside looking in. To be unwanted, unloved, neglected, and abandoned, I know all too well. He deserved a happy ending.

Very good. I like the characterization, the slow buildup to the sex with the parties, and the funny ending.

I feel like his transformation from hiding to proud of his features didn't really take enough time. You built up to it well but didn't wind down with it carefully enough. It also really hurt to have him laughed at so maliciously at the end. Not everyone is so mean.

i love your use of irony. also really enjoyed reading a non-horrific story in this contest.

Uh it is about halloween so it was the right kind of story for this contest keep up the good work.

This story wasn't about a monster, just someone who got treated as one. Shouldn't be in erotic horror....just romance or erotic couplings...

People can be so biased against others for any real or imagined affliction.But as my dear departed mama would say "there is someone out there for everyone." Again loved it.