All Comments on 'I Loved Babysitting Ch. 01'

by humpty

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biangelbiangelover 19 years ago
hot hot

great story and really hot, love tales of seduction. Can't wait to read more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Loved it!!

Wow....this is very hot. Like everyone else, I can't wait for more....please don't tease us. I just wish my daughter and I lived next to this woman (blush)...

humptyhumptyover 19 years agoAuthor
I loved baby sitting

I LOVED BABY SITTING

Very hot

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Good to have ya back Humpty!!!

Oh Humpty, oh how we've missed you & your amazing tales! This one was no exception except that it was exceptionally brilliant & has exceptional potential! I cannot wait for your next installment & perhaps then we can have a mom/daughter threeway with Christy scene, turning into mom & daughter going at it every chance they get! The next chapter should have Leslee having a hot orgy with her friends, Christy & Shari having fun with the other models, & then a great segue into Christy, Leslee, & Shari getting together!!! Then either end it there or carry it on with further "model training" for Shari & Lez! It's all up to you, just pitching my input. See ya next story!!! Don't stay away for so long this time...

Later,

Jim

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
loved the story but what about the grammar?

I loved the sex in this but it was marred by some terrible spelling and grammar errors...oh what an erotic scene with the mother...mmmmmmmm

CrankThzJackInDaBoxCrankThzJackInDaBoxalmost 11 years ago
my input:

1st off - looks like i'm first to leave any comments........ now 2nd -

couldn't read entire story right now bits&pieces here&there on&off

({[ bravo + encore + fantastic + awesome + phenomenal ]}) this here

entire story gonna quickly become one most popular entire site.........

now 3rd - part2 needs be completely about the daughter seduction over any

her girlfriends that take the bait this gonna also include sex romps that do

take place because of the seduction `` of course excellent details every step

the way just like you did entire story right here ``.......... now 4th - part3 must

actually be told about mother\daughter doesn't matter who starts `` of course

excellent details every step the way just like you did entire story right here ``

" possibly even " have ( christy ) be watching secret location + we'll need

actual cliffhanger that does tell us that all three of those women gonna have

an absolute sex romp being with excellent details completely going

entire story - part4

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Great story

All that's needed is the three of them

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Terrible

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