All Comments on 'I Never Thought'

This is the second "new" story I've read in a row that seems very familiar to me.

If you want people to be interested in your writing, you need to write stories long enough to get and keep them interested and you also need to provide enough details. This is an erotic story site, so the sex part is very important. Your story had a lot of buildup and then wham! the sex started and was over. Very disappointing so I hope you work on it.

It does need to relate more fully.

She has to talk less and suck and fuck more. give her daddy something to smile about.

beautiful and sensuous story... a little more to come I hope. Thanks.

males over-sized sex organs? It really detracts for the tale, at least from this females standpoint

Nothing here!