All Comments on 'I Saw Daddy Blowing Santa Claus'

by andtheend

Sort by:
  • 19 Comments
AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Stunning story

Always like to read about the characters it makes the rest of the story more erotic.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Well-developed characters

It could have benfited from more sex, but that might come in the next episode. Chicks write good MM sex stories, as a rule. This is a fine example. The straight-acting alcoholic male who is hiding gayness is a bit of a cliche, but this is porn, so we are not expecting Tolstoy.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

More garbage from one of Literotica's leading garbage producers...BOSTONFICTIONWRITER! Once again, he's put on his "girl" costume and is trying to pass the first of MANY stories that will be entered into this contest as the work of one of his exes'. GIVE US A BREAK FREDDIE! Pretty much the only positive comments that will be posted on an andtheend story are going to be from BFW alts. Everyone else can see this for the drivel and refuse that it is. A waste of contest space and an utter waste of time.

Please, Laurel and Manu! End the misery for your worthwhile contibuting authors. Please get rid of BostonFictionWriter (and all alts) and Scouries (and all alts.) Clean up your contests, clean up your forums, and make Literotica a fun place to be again. Get rid of the rabble-rousers/shit stirrers/whiny idiots.

andtheendandtheendover 13 years agoAuthor
You the one that should be banned

You seem to see BFW everywhere.

Either your paranoid or you love the writer.

You are the one who should be banned for writing your bashing post to all my stories.

Yet, you're the coward. Can't even identify yourself. Hiding behind Mommy's skirt. Nothing has changed for you, since you were a spitful little shit.

Is it any wonder why the kids chased you home from school every day? Yet, here you are, still doing the same things you did 50 years ago (lol).

Get a life, you sad little fuck of a man.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
I completely endorse the view of the sad little fuck of a man

PLEASE GET RID OF THIS FUCKING AWFUL SICKENING CHEAT OF AN AUTHOR AND HIS MYRIAD ALTS.

From another sad little fuck of a man.

mastersslave77mastersslave77over 13 years ago
Awesome!

Wonderful story, as always! Your one of the most talented on this website! And people making posts like him are just miserable and jealous! Their own lifes are unsatisfactory so they dump on everyone around! He wouldn't know a good story even if it hit him in the face! Of course you have nothing to stress about, you still have hundreds if not thousands of dedicated avid readers, who love all your wonderful stories!! And wait with baited breath for your next fabulous post! The Master's Slave

andtheendandtheendover 13 years agoAuthor
Thank you

Thank you masterslave for the kind words.

The check in in the mail (lol).

Actually, it's mentally disturbed posters like those below who ruin this site for those who love to write and those who love to read erotica.

Thank you for reading, voting, and for taking the time to comment on my story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Really Nice Ending

Merry Christmas!

YoursSINSerelyYoursSINSerelyover 13 years ago
Interesting Story

I don't normally read gay male stories, but I'm trying to read all of the contest entries. This one was written well with some heartfelt emotions woven into a very difficult subject. Nice work! ~~Babs

LOVS4PLAYLOVS4PLAYover 13 years ago
I HAVE DBL.STANDREDS.

I DO NOT NORMALLY READ STORIES ABOUT GAY MALES, AS THEY ARE A TOTAL TURN OFF.I DO HOWEVER LIKE THOSE INVOLVING WOMEN GETTING INVOLVED WITH ONE ANOTHER(YEA ITS A DOUBLE STANDARD)WHAT BROUGHT ME TO THIS STORY IS THE COMMENTS OF SOMEONE ELSE THAT HIDES BEHIND"ANONYMOUS"AND YES HE IS A BASHER.. I DON'T KNOW HOW MANY OF YOU READERS WILL NOTICE THIS, BUT HE DID LIKE THIS STORY MORE THAN THE LAST STORY BY THE SAME AUTHOR..HOW DO I KNOW? SIMPLE HIS "NEUROTIC & CANNED" COMMENTS WERE A ENTIRE PARAGRAPH SHORTER THAN HIE LAST UNWARRANTED ATTACK ON AndTheEnd ..IF YOU CAN READ THIS, THANK A TEACHER. IF YOU ARE READING IT IN ENGLISH, THANK A VET.

LOVS4PLAYLOVS4PLAYover 13 years ago
WHERE IS MY MIND??

WELL WRITTEN & EASY TWO READ.BUTT LOVS4PLAY CAN KNOT COUNT.AND THE BFW.BASHER EITHER CAN KNOT READ ORE HE HAS OTHER MENTAL CHALLENGES ,LIKE INABILITY TWO THINK ,CENTS HE ONLY USES THE EXACT,WORD 4 WORD B.S. TWO TEAR DOWN A AUTHORS WORK..EYE WOOD THINK THAT DIFFERENT STORIES & DIFFERENT STORY LINES WOOD EACH REQUIRE THEIR OWN INDIVIDUAL COMMENTS..WHAT HAS BECOME GLARING APPARENT .IS THAT THIS ANONYMOUS DIP-STICK ALL-SEW HAS DOUBLE STANDARDS... HE WHINES ABOUT REMOVING THE;RABBLE ROUSERS,POOP STIRRERS & THE WHINY IDIOTS...YET HE & EYE ARE VERY GUILTY OF .THOSE SAME THINGS.... RE;STORY , WHEN MOM STOPPED CLEANING & COOKING BOB , SHOULD HAVE GOTTEN A BIG DOG TOO HELP WITH THE DUSTING. PUT NEIGHBORS CAT IN THE HOUSE.. ADD HIS BIG DOG INTO THE HOUSE & CLOSE THE DOOR & YES THE TO OF THEM WILL GIVE MOST OF THE HOUSE A FAIRLY GOOD DUSTING...(-:

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Why is the voting turned off?

Why is the voting turned off on all your red H stories? It's as though you turned off the voting just in time to freeze those little red Hs. But isn't that against the rules of Literotica? You can only have the red H if you LEAVE THE VOTING TURNED ON.

Strangely enough, Bostonfictionwriter has done the same thing with all of his red H stories.

andtheendandtheendover 13 years agoAuthor
Why? Because

Actually, it is not against the rules of Literotica to turn off the voting. What it does though is excludes me from winning the contest.

Why do I turn off the voting? Because of whackos like you who take pleasure in erasing the red H's of authors that have spent time and considerable effort to write free stories for the pleasure of readers. Many authors have turned off the voting on their red H stories, PrincessErin for one.

Now, let me ask you a question? Why are you such an asshole on Thanksgiving Day. What did your mother do to raise such a miserable fuck as yourself to piss on everyone's story.

Your IP address has been reported.

Have a happy holiday.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Your amazing as always....

I love every one of your stories... You are one of my favorites. Ignore the idiots. I need to sign up so I don't have to post as anonymous! I really do love your writing. Keep it up!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
comma's

it was really well done. a good story...however the comma splices kinda irritated me so that wud b somthing to watch out for in the future. good job.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Good fiction

I enjoyed the story arc. Would have given it five stars but I needed more sex (or maybe just more detail in the sex that was written). Found very few grammatical and spelling errors which made it easy for me to stay engaged with it. Good solid effort! Ignore the flamer(s).

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Wished for more

This was a great story yet I was kinda hoping for more santa action

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I liked it alot demons are what most people have to deal with unfortunately not all are defeated.

MickyFox0MickyFox04 months ago

I liked this story. It felt so real ! I recently got told that my twentieth century thinking was not in line with twenty first century thinking. The more things change, the more they stay the same. In the old days, you had to respect your elders and now the youngsters demand the same. I am sorry if this is confusing 😜

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous