All Comments on 'I Seduced My Father'

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sirhugssirhugsover 10 years ago
What about the evening when...

...Cindy invited her friend over for a threesome with Daddy?

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Erm…

Look up the word “seduction” in the dictionary then I'll explain how there was no seduction in this so-called story. Absolutely pathetic.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
disgusting and totally unreal

This wasn't even a stroke story. The anal scenes were disgusting. There isn't a 36 year old man on the planet that can get it up that many times. 1 star.

viking3viking3over 10 years ago
nooooo

I've heard that there's no such thing as bad sex or bad porn. Wrong. This is awful. I'm ashamed to say that mine twitched, but sure didn't fire off. Bad, bad, bad.l

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
some funny comments here

This story WAS pretty shabby - but the comments were worth a grin or two -

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
yet again

Stopped reading soon as you wrote just over 8"

Get a life

SomethingInTheWaySheMovesSomethingInTheWaySheMovesover 10 years ago
Some words for you to look up: Sophomoric and Inane

In lieu of actually composing a list of all the reasons this story sucked, I'm just going to paraphrase from the movie "Billy Madison":

"What you have just written is one of the most insanely idiotic things I have ever read. At no point in your rambling, incoherent story were you even close to anything that could be considered literary or erotic. Everyone who waded through this pile of crap is now dumber for having read it. I award you one star, and may God have mercy on your soul."

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
What a load of shit

Stopped after 3 paras don't subject us to any more of your crappy writing

teddybearclubteddybearclubover 10 years ago
Had to hold my nose

I try. I really try to leave positive feedback. But this is a Total Piece of Horse Manure. No not that. I could fertilize my garden with shit. Either stop writing or take a few writing classes. Junk pure and simple. I gave it a star just cause you wrote. But will never read your mindless wanderings again. This should be double bagged and thrown to the dogs who would probably just piss on it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Lame

"And then I thought, 'oh my, maybe, I think, uh, now I am gonna wanna fuck or something.'"

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Seduced???

Wasn't much of a seduction...Just got her cunt plugged by a father who obviously has no moral scruples!! I couldn't even finish reading past the first half dozen paragraphs. Nothing but graphic sex!! No lead in, no descriptions, no story plot.....etc!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Title should have been...

Father - Daughter fantasy - roleplaying stories can be fun to read.

This story should have been titled...

"I threw my cunt at Dad".

As other readers, I didn't go past the third or fourth paragraph.

Perhaps you would like to use some serious imagination next time.

Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Crap

I stopped reading when you said she had an orgasm watching her father shoot his load. What???? The writing is horrible and the story is laughable. If you can't write better than this, give it up. At least use an editor if there is a next time.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
EEEEEWWWWW

I've had a few fucks over the years, but ONLY ONCE did I have a 'spontaneous ejaculaton.' And for a 38 YO man to have 4 or 5 in about an hour? Bullshit. Cumming then staying hard for an ass-fuck, and cumming again? BULLSHIT. I"ve never seen a worman 'open her asshole.' This whole story is crap - you just switched the mom to a dad & the son to a daugher from your other two stories. Pathetic.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Stupid ass story mayne

What the fuck this story was lame. How did she Seduced the father if all she did was remove her panties and open her legs when he came into the room. Fucking wack story I can write better then this wack shit.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
HAVE TO AGREE WITH MOST OF.....

...THE COMMENTS. VERY LAME, NO SEDUCTION WHATSOEVER. AND THE WORST PART IS WHEN THE DAUGHTER STATED TO USE HER LIKE A TEN DOLLAR WHORE. EVEN THAT WON'T BUY A DECENT BOOK. VERY UNREALISTIC. SORRY, SAYING IT LIKE IT IS.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
not seduction at all

There is nothing relating to seduction at all, ,boring, boring ,boring

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
not a bad story but not a good

Daddy,daughter. Sex is great i know i did my daughter when she was 15 and i still do.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Interesting!

My daughter and I have been making love since she was thirteen, she's now 21 years of age. Our daughter/father bond is stronger as a result of our intimacy. We love each other very much and wish we could get married. We have two kids who are healthy and full of life. My daughter and I can't get enough of each other, we sometimes make love 2 or 3 times a day. I am hopeful our lives will continue as is for a long, long time! Forever!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
crap

You were doing alright until you had the father start playing with her ass hole and then had him start to have sex with her that way. I don't know what it is about some of you who write on this site that thinks this is a good idea to slip into a story. I stopped reading right then. Totally ruined it for me. I removed your name and story titles from the list I keep with a separate program so I can check back on them to catch anything new. What a waste of time and effort.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
I want a video of you and ur daddy!

Ooohh....mmmmm....uhhhhhh I wanna moan Mmmmmmmm. ...I will moan louder if u send me the video babez

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
How to seduce my dad

I'm craving to have my dad's dick but I'm not sure how to get it. Can you help me?

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
beautiful

Beautiful story. I had similar with mother.

Incest can be beautiful

We are the living proof.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Fucking my daughters

I agree with people who have fucked there daughters, i am fucking my sixteen year old twin daughters,i walked in on them taking a shower together.i got an instant hard on so i got on with them and they said i had a nice cock and they wanted me to fuck them. so i put my cock up,there pussies. i have never had sex like it i ended up fucking both then on my marital bed. Now when my wife ie away me and the girl's spend the afternoon fuck each other

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
nice sexy story!!

fuck you bastard

Dmjewels69Dmjewels69over 3 years ago

I read every single comment, very entertaining!

I read this story up until he told her how her mom (who had abandoned them) liked his 8" cock. I wasn't entertained at all.

I usually leave good feedback or none at all but I just wanted to be part of the comments here :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Bruh...

Bro, seriously??? Dude...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Will you approve of your husband fucking your daughter now?

You have to know that will happen one day given your history.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Damn I'm hard

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

We love your story what other like to put it down we give you a 5 star + hot incest between a female and male of age in the same female is so hot like us brother and sister thank you my friends

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