by billkenn
...Cindy invited her friend over for a threesome with Daddy?
Look up the word “seduction” in the dictionary then I'll explain how there was no seduction in this so-called story. Absolutely pathetic.
This wasn't even a stroke story. The anal scenes were disgusting. There isn't a 36 year old man on the planet that can get it up that many times. 1 star.
I've heard that there's no such thing as bad sex or bad porn. Wrong. This is awful. I'm ashamed to say that mine twitched, but sure didn't fire off. Bad, bad, bad.l
This story WAS pretty shabby - but the comments were worth a grin or two -
In lieu of actually composing a list of all the reasons this story sucked, I'm just going to paraphrase from the movie "Billy Madison":
"What you have just written is one of the most insanely idiotic things I have ever read. At no point in your rambling, incoherent story were you even close to anything that could be considered literary or erotic. Everyone who waded through this pile of crap is now dumber for having read it. I award you one star, and may God have mercy on your soul."
Stopped after 3 paras don't subject us to any more of your crappy writing
I try. I really try to leave positive feedback. But this is a Total Piece of Horse Manure. No not that. I could fertilize my garden with shit. Either stop writing or take a few writing classes. Junk pure and simple. I gave it a star just cause you wrote. But will never read your mindless wanderings again. This should be double bagged and thrown to the dogs who would probably just piss on it.
"And then I thought, 'oh my, maybe, I think, uh, now I am gonna wanna fuck or something.'"
Wasn't much of a seduction...Just got her cunt plugged by a father who obviously has no moral scruples!! I couldn't even finish reading past the first half dozen paragraphs. Nothing but graphic sex!! No lead in, no descriptions, no story plot.....etc!!!
Father - Daughter fantasy - roleplaying stories can be fun to read.
This story should have been titled...
"I threw my cunt at Dad".
As other readers, I didn't go past the third or fourth paragraph.
Perhaps you would like to use some serious imagination next time.
Thank you.
I stopped reading when you said she had an orgasm watching her father shoot his load. What???? The writing is horrible and the story is laughable. If you can't write better than this, give it up. At least use an editor if there is a next time.
I've had a few fucks over the years, but ONLY ONCE did I have a 'spontaneous ejaculaton.' And for a 38 YO man to have 4 or 5 in about an hour? Bullshit. Cumming then staying hard for an ass-fuck, and cumming again? BULLSHIT. I"ve never seen a worman 'open her asshole.' This whole story is crap - you just switched the mom to a dad & the son to a daugher from your other two stories. Pathetic.
What the fuck this story was lame. How did she Seduced the father if all she did was remove her panties and open her legs when he came into the room. Fucking wack story I can write better then this wack shit.
...THE COMMENTS. VERY LAME, NO SEDUCTION WHATSOEVER. AND THE WORST PART IS WHEN THE DAUGHTER STATED TO USE HER LIKE A TEN DOLLAR WHORE. EVEN THAT WON'T BUY A DECENT BOOK. VERY UNREALISTIC. SORRY, SAYING IT LIKE IT IS.
There is nothing relating to seduction at all, ,boring, boring ,boring
Daddy,daughter. Sex is great i know i did my daughter when she was 15 and i still do.
My daughter and I have been making love since she was thirteen, she's now 21 years of age. Our daughter/father bond is stronger as a result of our intimacy. We love each other very much and wish we could get married. We have two kids who are healthy and full of life. My daughter and I can't get enough of each other, we sometimes make love 2 or 3 times a day. I am hopeful our lives will continue as is for a long, long time! Forever!
You were doing alright until you had the father start playing with her ass hole and then had him start to have sex with her that way. I don't know what it is about some of you who write on this site that thinks this is a good idea to slip into a story. I stopped reading right then. Totally ruined it for me. I removed your name and story titles from the list I keep with a separate program so I can check back on them to catch anything new. What a waste of time and effort.
Ooohh....mmmmm....uhhhhhh I wanna moan Mmmmmmmm. ...I will moan louder if u send me the video babez
I'm craving to have my dad's dick but I'm not sure how to get it. Can you help me?
Beautiful story. I had similar with mother.
Incest can be beautiful
We are the living proof.
I agree with people who have fucked there daughters, i am fucking my sixteen year old twin daughters,i walked in on them taking a shower together.i got an instant hard on so i got on with them and they said i had a nice cock and they wanted me to fuck them. so i put my cock up,there pussies. i have never had sex like it i ended up fucking both then on my marital bed. Now when my wife ie away me and the girl's spend the afternoon fuck each other
I read every single comment, very entertaining!
I read this story up until he told her how her mom (who had abandoned them) liked his 8" cock. I wasn't entertained at all.
I usually leave good feedback or none at all but I just wanted to be part of the comments here :)
You have to know that will happen one day given your history.
We love your story what other like to put it down we give you a 5 star + hot incest between a female and male of age in the same female is so hot like us brother and sister thank you my friends