All Comments on 'I See a Red Door'

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tazz317tazz317about 12 years ago
THE DEPRSONIFICATION OF A MAN

or forcing him to come out. TK U MLJ LV NV

aoife70aoife70about 12 years ago

Very hot. And very intelligently done. There hasn't been any decent femdom here for a long time....and then you come along. Please keep writing.

switch53switch53about 12 years ago
Quality Not Quantity

Excellent short piece of erotic fiction. As a stand alone essay it literally left me panting for more. But it's the greedy lustfulness in me that thinks it should have several (or at least 3,lol) more chapters. Hope to see more!

mel_pomenemel_pomeneabout 12 years ago
Very good indeed.

One of the best very short stories I have come upon in a long time, a piece of quality writing, as commented on by others. It would be interesting to see this re-written in a longer form, but as it stands is well worth top marks.

Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Miscategorized and Shallow

Cardboard characters in a story that belongs in NC.

warriorpoet7532warriorpoet7532almost 12 years ago
A little longer for him to be broken.

I agree that this is mostly a non-consent/reluctance story for the most part but it is made very clear very early on that the male protagonist is very submissive.

I had hoped that it would have taken a bit longer to break his spirit but that does not always happen.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Re warrior poet's comment

Because some one has a submissive personality rape is okay? Batshit crazy bitch. Prelude to dead in a ditch is not sexy.

FailedscoutFailedscoutover 9 years ago
Great Read

I read this story when you first posted it and I remember that I loved it then. I can't wait to finish reading it again.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Love it!

Got Her address??

sublockedsublockedalmost 9 years agoAuthor
Address

6969 Fantasy Lane,

Domina of Canada

T2P3Y6

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

yas

TrstxxxTrstxxxalmost 2 years ago

I wish she had found me. And owned me also.

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