by sublocked
Very hot. And very intelligently done. There hasn't been any decent femdom here for a long time....and then you come along. Please keep writing.
Excellent short piece of erotic fiction. As a stand alone essay it literally left me panting for more. But it's the greedy lustfulness in me that thinks it should have several (or at least 3,lol) more chapters. Hope to see more!
One of the best very short stories I have come upon in a long time, a piece of quality writing, as commented on by others. It would be interesting to see this re-written in a longer form, but as it stands is well worth top marks.
Thank you.
Cardboard characters in a story that belongs in NC.
I agree that this is mostly a non-consent/reluctance story for the most part but it is made very clear very early on that the male protagonist is very submissive.
I had hoped that it would have taken a bit longer to break his spirit but that does not always happen.
Because some one has a submissive personality rape is okay? Batshit crazy bitch. Prelude to dead in a ditch is not sexy.
I read this story when you first posted it and I remember that I loved it then. I can't wait to finish reading it again.