All Comments on 'I Thought I Hated Him Ch. 03'

This was amazing, once again you left me wanting more keep up the good work and please don't keep us waiting too long!

I've been dying for the next chapter! Please don't keep your fans waiting.

fantastic but you have such a cruel streak to leave it hanging there, please can we have more and very soon

You leave us panting for more... Amazing! I'm anxiously awaiting the next chapter. Can't wait. Thank you!

You are so very mean for leaving us hanging right there. Hopefully you'll get the next chapter out very soon otherwise there could be a mutiny.

Just hope your next chapter will be posted soon!

and as my editor always used to tell me, keep em panting for more.

All I can say is soon please.

...leaving us hanging like that! That was delightfully erotic, you are very skilled! Thanks for sharing your talent with us...but please be quick with the next instalment!

Very well written and thought out. You should consider writing professionally.

This exquisitely prolonged build-up is the most wonderful sensation. I didn't think the author could write anything better than she did in the "Hell, yeah" series. I was wrong ... so very, very wrong.

Don't leave us hanging like that!!! Can't wait for the next installment!

I ACTUALLY SQUEALED WHEN I FOUND YOU'D UPDATED :D [I'm so lame!]

You left it!

You just left it there?!

Oooooh, you evil minx!

I'm loving the enigma of Daniel. His faith in her, although somewhat shocking and harsh to chuck her in at the deep end, is just wonderful! And I LOVE Clara's fire! I've read other stories that try to make their heroines feisty and they don't really succeed, making the female protaganists seem fake - you're fab at it :)

"there is nothing sexier than a man in the kitchen" Amen to that!

MORE, MORE, MORE!

Please?

Zera xxx

IF YOU DON'T POST THE NEXT PART SOON I WILL DIEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

Great story, but I'm a dork. It's eating heartily, not hardily. But really fantastic story - can't wait for more.

Got tired of waiting on the story. You lost me.

Looking forward to the next chapter.

Wow! Just loved it! Can't wait for more!!! And that one reviewer that said "Done. Got tired of waiting on the story. You lost me", well too bad for him. Probably a quick-shooter anyway!

Keep 'em coming!

of the Fountainhead. Keep it up.

The pros: This series is absolutely the best writing I've encounterd on literotica. I don't even care about the sex; I just want to read more about the characters. This is the real McCoy. Thanks.

The cons: Aside from a few editing glitches, only one. You're making it almost impossible for me to appreciate any other submissions.

has been reviewed in the New Story Review thread in the Author's Hangout.

a writer, or a commenter, will tell us that this is Erotica and not an English class. One has only to read a story like this to quickly see the difference between a pretender and the genuine article. If you like a story in spite of numerous grammatical and spelling errors, know that it would be exponentially better if well written. This young lady demonstrates this fact. She brings it all to the table. We now know that passion and skill, rare as they are, make an incredible combination. This girl is good!

I read so much stuff on this site that is highly erotic and so poorly written that I cannot keep my concentration up to enjoy the work. You have very few technical errors and they do not detract from my enjoyment of the work. I am anxious to see this story through to its conclusion.

This is one great story I love the characters just want to read more about them you're doing an excellent job

You truly have a talent for writing. I'm thoroughly enjoying this series.

SIDE NOTE: I laughed out loud when Clara was having trouble sleeping and the clock read 3:37. In my story, Alice Unbound, Alice wakes several times at 3:37. Small world.

WOW! i could keep on reading the next chapters, but you deserve a great, big KUDOS first.

. . . we need something higher than a "5" in the scoring system. This is one of those times.

but i can't stop reading.... OMG. I'm going to have amazing dreams tonight.

Such a hot story.

Awh Girl, beautiful.

Soulmates, don't you think :)

Another really wonderful chapter.

Decent, gentle.

But im obsessed with your work, ever since i found writers block i looked everywhere on literotica for something that good, couldnt find anything so i read hell yeah. I pulled an all nighter reading the whole serious, just like with writers block (FINISH IT!!!). Tonight i am going to read this entire serious until im done and then im gonna cry myself to sleep knowing that it is HARD to find well written, extremely classy and erotica (none of that i sucked his cock in the boardroom cause were both horny shit, the serious stuff) the characters are deep and tangible, grammar is great, and you wish it was you stories on this site. Not saying its impossible, just hard.

You keep this up missy, hopefully go pro. Youll make us night crawlers happy bees.

This is one of the few stories that is so well written that it leaves me in no doubt that this author is a professional .It just flows so beautifully and the grammar and phrasing are faultless .

It seems Daniel will keep his promise.......this is hot!!! I hope I'll be able to accomplish my homework today!!!! ;-)