All Comments on 'I Thought I Hated Him Ch. 10'

simply breathtaking story and absolutely "unputdownable" .... and the best story i've read so far on this site...

This ending is bloody great!! xxx

going into my list of favourites....

If you only read a handful of Literotica stories, put this series as read #1. I have never read a better female character in my life......simply stunning. I know this isn't a new story, but I beg the author to continue on. There are many chapters in their life journey to be told...so many tears...so many smiles...so many laughs. The best!

I don't remember the last time I felt so compelled to read through the entire 10 chapters of a story as quickly as possible!! I had to steal moments by myself throughout the entire day yesterday because any pause in my reading started causing me tiny bouts of anxiety!! ;D truly an enjoyable read!! I hope you're still writing, because you're very good at it!! (and seriously, I will be keeping my eye out for a real-life Daniel... I have, after all, always had a thing for dragons.) :D :D

I really enjoyed this and the other stories you have written. It is in the same league as 'A Stringed Instrument' which is my favourite story in this site. Please keep writing.

I am one... and your dialogue and interaction between characters are wonderful... building and retreating, then building ever higher.

Lovely story, great writing and best wishes for you with your novel.

I love the way you develop and weave your stories...Daniel and Clara were distinctive individual characters ..i could see them fighting and making love they jumped off the pages!!!!!! Thank you for a brilliant story!!!!!!!! Keep up the wonderful work.......

I quite enjoyed the story. The only problem is I was more interested in the architecture than the sex.I wanted to hear about them proceeding with the plans and repairing the building, dealing with contractors.

This story was so good I would have given it 10 stars if I could.

Even though I gave a few 4 stars initially I think that the entire novella is worthy of all 5 :)

Thank you for sharing it. It was a wonderful read. It worked for me on all levels. Well written (Including good grammar and spellings :D), perfectly crafted, nice characterisation, the story line has the right amount of technicality but not too much, it's romantic, and yes it has a very dominating male protagonist (which I usually stay clear of), but the female protagonist is so strong that it creates the perfect balance.

Keep writing!

a brilliant piece - thanks so much - now I can finally got to bed after a loonnng night of reading - damn you're addictive!!

thank you for this terrific story. I loved how the relationship was built and how they overcame some problems. The only thing I wished to see was Worthington brought down for the slime he was shown to be. Thanks again

Has to be the best story on this site.

This is still my favorite story on here.

THANK You. Thank you for sharing your writing with us!

A wonderful story filled with conflict and passion. I'll add some tears of joy. 😂

- pal

Hey,

I liked reading your stories and read all of them like 1000 times al ready. Why don't you write more stories? I think people here will love to read more from you,especially me. Do start writing again.

This really could be made in to a movie. So wonderfully written.

I was so consumed with your writings, that I suggested my wife read as well.

Awesome job.

On to the next series

Over the years I have read many series stories but never saved to re-read. This one is a keeper. I studied as an architect and it hit home with me. I never got that perfect job, ended up in a government job, but there I did meet my wife of 44 years.

Hmmm, shall I start another Firstkiss story? 😁

Pat in Daytona

dbside@yahoo.com

I went on this website to quickly relieve myself of some sexual tension, but I found this and it's amazing. I've fallen in love with characters and their development, you should definitely look into professional writing, I know I'd be one of your biggest fans if you did.

I really appreciate your writing you are a wonderful story teller

There's nothing to say just fantastic, thank you very much 😘

This is the second time I read this story and it touched my heart both times! Excellent!

This is my 3rd time reading this story and I cannot get enough of it! As much as I crave for more I also think you ended it perfectly! Well done!

Simply put…one of the best and certainly one of the sweetest romances I’ve read here! Absolutely great!

I've read all of your stories and love them all, you are an excellent author. More please!

I've been complaining that this sounded like a silly Romance story and forgot I like romance stories. I didn't care for this one but the writing kept me going, and then the story drew me in, it all came together, the characters real...so at last, a solid two thumbs up...5...now I wish it could go on.

I really liked this story and i really like your writing and vocabulary. My only minor gripe would be why does Daniel have to be called the most handsome every other paragraph. Kinda makes me think the romance is a little more shallow than it would be otherwise. I mean hes already distinguished, sucessful,wealthy, but he's also the most beautiful man alive too? Makes it a no brainer to fall for him whether hes an ass or not...ya know?.... But great tale

thank you for this tremendous romance.

Excellent! I hope you occasionally come back to this website and review all the comments you have received since you stopped posting new stories here.