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Click hereJennifer was standing before me the, riding crop held loosely in her hand.
"My turn I think, Michael dearest." She was offering me the riding crop.
There was a flash of light in my head. I smiled as I took the riding crop. Jennifer stood quite still as I laid into her body.
She was still smiling when I applied the lash to every inch of her body.
She was still smiling as I used her mouth, her cunt, her anus and her cunt again and again until I came for the second time. I made one last thrust and lay still with my weight pressed down on the women's bodies beneath me. I felt myself slacken and wilt. I felt Jennifer's cunt try to hold me in but I felt myself fall out. I used Jennifer's shoulders to leaver myself up and off the silent women. I flopped back on to the settee.
Jennifer said. "Love you dearest Michael. Let's sleep."
I was led to a bedroom and as I fell into the bed, I saw it was 1:30 am. I had to drive the limo tomorrow.
Rebecca tucked us in. "The alarm call has been arranged. Sleep."
Thus ended the first full day of my Ibiza holiday.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 9 years agoIBIZA: "the crowds of tourists at Ibiza are sophisticated, hip, rich, young, and beautiful. You won't find Mom and Pop snapping Polaroid."
Anonymousover 9 years ago"...Believe it or not, I was a virgin when I got married to Jennifer and I knew she was not! We had courted for two years..."
Oh man, you have a confusion in your mind! Use a beach in South Carolina or in North Florida for these stories;Ibiza is totally a different thing!
Anonymousalmost 13 years agoWell if you did not bother to read the story, your opinion is worthless. If you feel you need to trash the stories you should at least give the author the courtesy of a complete reading
bruce_steeleabout 17 years agonicely descriptive, but I would like more dialog between characters.
Anonymousover 17 years agoMarried to a chameleon who now wants a love - change that to a beating after her BDSM session with someone she didn't seem to know which was preceeded by her trying to pimp him out to any warm hole possible? HUH?
What the hell is this story about? A bunch of psycho perverts trapped in a funny farm? Helter skelter whom and where?
Writer - your foundation is now twisted and contorted and no one cares if it just a suck and fuck but now enters the BDSM - can pissing, watching and other fetishes be far in hind? Where are you going and where should it be subjectwise?
RonClarkesonover 17 years agoAuthorYes I need an editor any want to offer?
Yes the whole thing was a set up. I have another 7 chapters waiting to go!
The rambling sentences were deliberate. I wanted to evoke the confusion going through the poor mans mind as his wife led him into this bizare situation.
My spell checker did not find any miss-spelled words but then I am using an English dictonary for what is an English story!
Anonymousover 17 years agonow what would the silly bitch have done if he was totally repulsed by such actions and he had just walked out on them. He let his anger rule and whipped a woman all over her body including her face. Did he consider what the husband would think when he returned to the room? Did he consider AIDS and other such diseases that run widely in such groups of people. Use her abuse her then make love to me then she offers herself up for abuse. Both girls are pain sluts and by the way it reads this was a setup from get go. She knew Rebecca from previous trips probably and this was an arranged meeting.
How would it feel to be totally in love with your woman and find out she is a pain slut with a totally slutty life. Safe Sane Consensual sex preagreed by husband and wife is one thing. This is just manipulation of one by the other for their own enjoyment. A self loving, self important, egotistical woman who wants to control and manipulate her mate, while being very disrespectful (see how she treated him when he did not do what she wanted) and as disloyal and conniving (lying she did set this up) as one can be. Enjoy all their asses and get a divorce upon getting home it is the best way out. Her self needs will ruin you if you dont.
BedtimeStories77over 17 years agoWhile I will somewhat agree with "Anon" that an editor would have helped in shaping up the structure of this story, I do not agree with the trolls in any other respect.
This story was hot and very sexy. I enjoyed the content very much! Of course, as is discussed in various author's corners of the BB, it seems many readers in Loving Wives are self haters who have nothing better to do than run down a story! It has also been discussed by many authors that D/s is oftentimes found within the Loving Wife genre.
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Keep up the good work Ron! (And maybe consult an editor to check out the finished product.)
