by ErroticWhispers
This is a good story. Lets see if she really tries to put him away, or if she becomes enslaved to him.
amazing how someone can slam a writer, and not leave their name. I personally found the story a very good one. Granted I found a few errors, but we are talking about amiture writers. I do however, suggest a different ending to the story.
Cynthia
The lady gets him off. So what does he do he rapes her and lets her live. Not a very bright individual
After such a long build-up, the rape itself was surprisingly brief. More could have been made of it. Disappointed in that aspect, but liked the rest. Confirmation that he was guilty of Susan's rape as well while he fucked the lawyer would've been hot.
right he'll pay for her being a whore.it was basically consensual when he started fucking her.