by magmaman
I wouldn't mind a second chapter here - would be interesting to see how she raises a pup I mean a cub, no I mean a kid... child?
Ignore the other comments. You have a great style and a matter of fact delivery. I will complain that the ending seemed a bit rushed, but overall it was a refreshing post to read on this site.
something to finding out her history, if she could re-call, or Dan going to the library and looking up some old news articles, anything, this would be a nice series to continue.
Really nice story! For me the big wolf was her pack leader formally passing her back to her people....
Nearly didn't read it, and I'm glad I did. Loved the style of the male character, "Never did understand women anyway".
Thanks for this.
Wonderful love story !! Enjoyed it very much.
Just a note from an Australian sheep farmer - we have "herds" of cattle and "flocks" of sheep !
Ali Ahmad
Western Australia
I enjoyed this story very, very much!!! I would like to see it continued - it needs an ending !!
CCH
Old story concept with a great slant - really a great job of adapting it to your style and this site -
That was an awesome tale. I could read your stuff over and over again. Thanks author, your efforts are appreciated.
While the actual premise is pretty far fetched, the way the story is told is really well done. The reactions of both Dan and Jane are handled beautifully and tastefully and it makes their budding romance sweeter for it. By not giving in the first few times she offered to mate with him he opened the door to a more romantic coupling. Wolves mate for life.
It was also good that Jane didn't immediately fall into being civilized. That would have made the story much less realistic. Really well done story, one of my favorites from MGM.
Where men are men and the sheep run scared.
At least she was better than a ewe.