All Comments on 'If Alex and I Meet In Person'

umm...It is a hot story. Your story telling can be slowed down a little bit, not rushing directly into the sex, a build up would be nice, more touching, more emotion overall can be placed into your writing. The whole thing about him feeling small and insignificant in your arms is funny and it reflects some of the feelings guys feel about sex (am i good enough? did she get off or is she satisfied?). Although, it is supposed to be a letter to him about what you would do with him if you two met up, allow some dialog to come from him to come to the story. basing the stories on the letters you write to him is a great idea, but to actually just copy and paste them when you can just allow your mind to run a little wild with what his movements and speech would be would make the story so much more in depth and a little bit more entertaining instead of a letter that closely resembles a wet dream that someone had.

yeah....overall good job...keep trying...