All Comments on 'If I Knew Then... Ch. 05'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
What is

a poorly daughter?

MVPrimetimeMVPrimetimeover 13 years agoAuthor
Poorly daughter...

Idiomatic expression - In Ireland if someone is feeling unwell (in this case suffering from bad period pains and so on) they are referred to as being "poorly" or "feeling poorly". So Mr Harty's poorly daughter was the menstrually challenged Penny.

Thanks for the comment, by the way - like all authors it is nice to know that someone is paying attention (unashamed attention seekers, every one.)

gmc1978gmc1978over 13 years ago
I like the story

Thanks for this nice story, i really like to read it. There is always coming something unexpected and this keeps the thrill for me to wait for the next part. Hope there are come many parts - college time is long.

spearishspearishabout 11 years ago
Penny Obsession

Poor Penny yet again .....I thought in this version you might stick to Jill who you claim to love (and who seems as manipulating as you so a good match) and leave Penny alone but you just can't help manipulating her life yet again lol

MVPrimetimeMVPrimetimeabout 11 years agoAuthor
Obsession

Spearish - I have been obsessed with Penny for thirty years - not giving up now!

I have finished the Bad Penny series - recently posted the last chapter. Perhaps that might explain why she still haunts my dreams and hopes

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The story of my life is not as interesting as the versions of that story that I write and submit here. I am not fast at writing, so please bear with me. Now that the Bad Penny story has been completed (witht eh Always turns up sequel) I have to admit that "If I Knew Then.. "...

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