All Comments on 'If You Want'

Ahhh...I'm the first...smiles. Thanks for sharing this. It is really good to see stories like yours on here. I look forward to seeing more from you.

Magda

great story.

When I was a university student in the 1970s, I heard men say that having foreskin ruled out fellatio. That is ridiculously wrong; all men should rinse off the tips of their penises before letting a woman suck on them. But this is as easy as it is necessary.

I was so afraid that women would react to my foreskin the way Katie does initially, that I graduated a virgin. I completely lacked the self-confidence to handle myself in the way the narrator of the above story does. I do now, but have been married for more than 20 years, and am in my 60s.

The internet suggests that there is a growing curiosity about sex with intact men among young unmarried women. It is not possible for me to contribute to their education. No woman under 40 has any business taking an interest in me. Roads not taken. Sigh...

Cool story

Good pacing. There's real writing talent here. Nice work!

I really hope this means that they became exclusive. I’m unapologetically romantic. I want protagonists in happily ever-ness, lol.