All Comments on 'Ignition'

Love the language and the way the plot developed, the emotion and the outcome. Thank you.

Marriage isn't a lifestyle; it's a marvelous partnership. "Rounded" implies somehow better. Hogwash. Live and let live isn't compatible with "my ideas are superior to yours." You're a snob.

Because each one is tied up within his or her own concerns and projections, each totally misunderstands the other one until a personal call is accidentally overheard. Then it becomes TLW rediscovered. Sweet!

Good read right section. Thanks for sharing.

I think you misunderstood my meaning by "well rounded." For this couple they are very very conservative, to the poi t of masturbation, anal, public etc being completely unthinkable. This will be the story of their journey to embracing their sexual desires and growing in that as a couple, it may or may not lead to including others in their sex life. That was the meaning of a well rounded sexual lifestyle.

Sorry you think I'm a snob

enjoyed it. 4* for being well written.

After seeing so many cheating stories in this category it is a relief to see a true Loving Wife story. Thank you.

I know a lot of married blokes who would love 'vanilla' like that! Nice story, romantic, realistic and fun. By the way, nicely written and just the right length...

Foreword.

Well written, looking forward to reading what discoveries this couple make.

Nice story. Looking forward to seeing them "develop"...

just hope you don't go the domination rout like your other story.

You write terrific stories! I suppose the sex is fairly vanilla, but if so, vanilla just became my new favorite flavor...

Good this far with just the two of them. Doubt it will stay that way.