by mitchawa
The author can't even be bothered to get the peoples names correct. We have 2 different guys named Tom in the same paragraph 3 different times. Impossible to read with errors such as those. The story is really not very good any way you look at it. 2*'s for trying at least.
Not exactly two men named Tom...Neal's Sweetie calls NEAL 'Tom' after being intimate with him! Since Neal is a very powerful guy, he doesn't notice! Maybe she's testing Neal to see if he pays ANY attention to her? Or maybe Mitchawa just screwed up!
Tom is just TOO good to be true! Surprised he doesn't have a 13" cock! Thank goodness!
3*