All Comments on 'I'll String Along With You'

You sir write from my heart. I am a happily married man and my wife, as far as I know, has never cheated on me so I am not some angry divorced guy. What I am is a guy with a severe sense of right and wrong smothered and deep fat fried in a big ole smattering of justice. You have always written from my fantasies of these type situations. Ignore the grammar police screaming for you to get an editor or the reality police who yell from the mountain tops that it doesn't work like this in real life. Uh, news flash, this is a fiction site. We read for escapes. We read for entertainment and you sir entertain me greatly.

Good for a two star vote. I guess wife just discovered she was married to a psychopath.

Look to your soul man. This shit is not good for your mental health

The affair made him bitter not a better man. He should spend most of the $ on therapy.

Talk about a guy who carried a grudge! I liked it!!

so her husband turns out to be a vindicate bitch himself. Nothing against revenge, but this is taking the bucket way too far (for my taste, anyway).

cunt twenty years earlier, love your stories because it pisses the sickos off,

I am all for btb most of the time, but in this case he went too far. We don't know any details of why back then, but she obviously recommitted herself to him as she didn't stray again. He could still leave her, but come on, leaving her destitute at 61. It would have been very difficult for her at 41 when the affair ended. Instead he stayed in the marriage for another 20 years for the sex and to render more severe punishment? Even a murderer after 20 years can get a pardon. What about the other 98% of his life. I wouldn't put up with being married to someone I hated no matter how great the sex. Seems to me he sentenced himself to 20 years in prison to punish her.

Some people just don't get it. A wronged, betrayed man's revenge knows no limits. This was just a quick tale of how that revenge could manifest itself. She's lucky she survived.

Don't cheat.

I have noted that the worst revenge is always about men being cheated on by women. I have to ask how folks would like a woman to respond to a cheating husband?

A read short and depressing!

i LOVE your stories you write bout my life ONLY i never got the good end... keep it up

There is no dress rehearsal for life! Why would he waste 20 years of his life? What idiot would applaud such stupidity? Not much of a story as a result.

Instead of dealing with her affair he waited to destroy two lives. Maybe one could have been handled better. But to dump your wife after using her all those years makes for a sad story. He is as we call a bastard,son of a bitch, sick excuse for a man.

I read Literotica to find stories that make me feel good and turn me on.

Nicely written but I don't need any more depressing things.

This is the way, cheating is supposed to be dealt with - not that wimp husband bullshit.

If a betrayed husband remains with the cheating bitch for sake of his children, but he divorces his cheating wife after the graduation of his youngest child, that is a thing, There are some excellent stories with that plote. (OldHideki's fantastic super story is an example) I can understand that thing, but he punished himself to live with the cheating bitch for years. All right this is a Cruel Revenge story. I must give 5*****. If the owners of the Literotica had creat a new hub with the title Cheating Wives for the sexual majority husband stories, I would have given only 3***., but the two type stories are together here so my 5***** vote remains.

Too little, too late. Punishing some ridiculous old woman is meaningless - she's already had her fun at his expense.

He's a cuck, and any pretense at "anger" now when he's been getting cucked for the last 21 years by five different men is a stupid joke.

"I love you

You sir write from my heart. I am a happily married man and my wife, as far as I know, has never cheated on me so I am not some angry divorced guy. What I am is a guy with a severe sense of right and wrong smothered and deep fat fried in a big ole smattering of justice. You have always written from my fantasies of these type situations. Ignore the grammar police screaming for you to get an editor or the reality police who yell from the mountain tops that it doesn't work like this in real life. Uh, news flash, this is a fiction site. We read for escapes. We read for entertainment and you sir entertain me greatly."

I am from a similar demographic as above and I agree whole heartily, I too believe in justice. In the past the punishment for adultery was death. She is getting off easy.

you have a good mind for the story, sick, very sick, but good, in a sick sort of way. i cant quit laughing.

Living for 20 years with someone you hate is not a good life.

But he wanted to get his revenge on the predador without going to prison.

But you know that back sixty years ago people shot the adulterous couple and then pleaded temporary insanity.. Of course if you do not have a gun.....

I think some time table to wait 5 years for the the cruel revenge to wait 2-3-4 years for the betli play (to play a bankrupcy before divorce to give low share in the divorce is the betli play) is an more digestiveable plot, because maximum 9 years investment in a revenge.

However this is only 12-14 years shorter revenge, but he had 12-14 years without bitch life...............,

Not sure about you. Seems you might be pulling everyone's legs here. Not much revenge in staying with the cheater most of your adult life, just to punish her toward the end. Even then, you're punishing yourself just as much (bankruptcy, menial labor, etc). Might your real message be bitterness and revenge are so bad for both parties there will be no winners?

I'm not sure which is more entertaining, your story or the comments from the readers. Sticks and stones all over the place. Two decent quickies in a row. I sense a thread running through your stories that concerns anger. I wonder if it might have it's roots in your experience or is just the product of an active imagination. Thanks for sharing, keep writting.

...is not a verb.

Thanks for the quick snapshot of a mans retribution

I enjoyed the first story perhaps because I was fed up with the seemingly endless cuckold stories posted. This one not so much, A line from a Tim McGraw song comes to mind: "I don' t know why you have to be angry all the time". Oh well, ty for writing.

Jen

Story got a "1" from me. There should be a separate category for these revenge stories. Nothing sexy about a sick sadistic man who punishes everyone around him (himself included). I found it lacking in every way imaginable! IMO, only a truly depraved and person could enjoy this type of story, BAD stuff!

Myself not so much. 1*

@ Anon you are right the sexual majority husband stories and the sexual minority husband stories should dived in two hubs! However the owners of the Literotica do not want to this.............Unfortunately.

Way to get back at the cheating bitch and her boyfriend. Smacked them in the face from out of nowhere

Yes, "Anger" is a running theme of my stories. If you read my profile you will realize that I am writing these stories to release pent up anger. I am a very mild mannered guy; I am one with a wild imagination and I use my imagination to release my negative energy. I know it is unfair to subject all of you to these hateful stories and evil characters. I generally do not post here, mostly on SOL. I just posted here because I was fed up with all the cuckold shit being posted here. I appreciate your time reading the story.

Thanks for posting this. You are right. A breath of fresh air from all the cuck tales being posted here. Might have been a bit over the top but I would rather read this than the other trash being posted.Keep writing.

A little extreme for me, but I'd certainly would like a followup to this story.

Thank you for sharing your stories. Please keep on writing.

This story seems to function as proof of the fact that you are VERY angry. While I understand his anger at his wife, it seems to me that he waited around for a long time to get some revenge. Had she really been a good wife all those years after her affair? Did that not serve to lessen his anger? Memories fade over the years and it seems a tad unrealistic that he would hold onto that much anger for all those years. Especially after he practically murdered her lover. A paraplegic? That's pretty harsh. Makes him a criminal. And a not-nice-guy.

for me to think about..

You wrote a good story, but got low ratings, paybacks are a bitch LADIES......bill

is the payback worth Peace Of Mind, TK U MLJ LV NV

And she was the perfect wife for all of that?

She proved she would not repeat it and still nuclear?

That is some weird anger dude - to hide it that well that long while she did all the right things to make up for (except confess and apologize of course she was not perfect at all) that is well - just a bit extreme.

But the exit was priceless heh

Still laughing at your stupidity and the failure of this silly story.

Don't cheat. Somehow, someway. sometime the betrayed party will get their revenge.

This is a pure hate story. Didn't like it at all.

I think it is great. It should happen to a lot of cheating wives.

Would have been a five but he waited too damn long to get his revenge.

But don't you think she would have gotten an attorney and that said attorney would have gotten both a PI and a forensic accountant involved? No money? Not needed. Any good attorney would have taken a brief look, seen the possibilities and either taken her on pro bono or on contingency. Always a lot of scum bags in the ranks of attorneys sniffing around for a money maker and you were one. Finding your cabin would have taken about 3 or four hours. You're toast my friend. Nice fantasy, but you lost.

Don't think that's how it works in the real world. Nice to be able to fantasize that it could. Great story.

Revenge is best served cold....But he served it frozen...

But of course she has his Social Security. And at age 62 she can claim it. Not much but she won't be destitute. She would have no trouble finding a greedy lawyer that will take her case for a percentage of what he recovers. And since you're going to be living in New England, a good PI will have no problem tracing your past travels to the cabin. Which means she owns half the cabin. And anything else he finds. Plus which, I'm sure the Police will want to investigate your finances and you're assault on Paul. At the rate you're going, you'll be lucky to avoid substantial jail time. Nice fantasy, but an implausible one.

I think the statute of limitations is up on the assault charge, as it was 15 years ago. Just sayin...

Anony - Since it was premeditated and the injury was disabling - leaving the victim unable to walk and perhaps impotent, it will probably be classified as a heinous crime . . . no statue of limitations for criminal prosecution . . . I don't know about civil. I think there can be a civil suit if the damage is 'tolled' (held for other than the date of original incident . . . e.g. later discovery of injury, later discovery of perpetrator, etc. . . . it depends upon the State).

So, she tells Paul and the police. Husband goes to jail. She sells cabin (which will be found) - though if Paul CAN sue, he'll get most or all of it, if not, she splits her half with Paul, and leaves half the cash for husband . . . but he owes alimony, which will come out of his half . . .and she'll get some of his Social Security when she turns 62. He'll probably rot and die in prison while she'll probably manage.

Revenge is seldom worth it. It is NOT a dish best served cold . . . it is a dish best served intelligently, which he failed to do. The best revenge is living well . . . which he won't, but she might . . . so the final revenge will be hers . . . unless she truly loves him, in which case she will share his suffering.

for the total destruction of BTB, TK U MLJ LV NV

c24j knows his stories are shit so he always rewrites other author's story with his slant on life.

Anony 4/19 . . . actually my stories are more sci-fi. Here in the LW category, I am more inspired by others. Some make me want to figure out what will happen (my 'slant') . . . with others I have a some idea about what would happen in the real world (not my 'slant', just recognizing the more likely outcomes).

That latter speaks to how plausible a story is (as someone else pointed out). Now, many defend the implausible saying something like, 'Hey, it's fiction!', (implying it's okay to be implausible). While that's true, implausibility often takes away from the story. Dangerouslyd has a good story going here. It's well written in my opinion, and I'm really eager to see it play out. If kept plausible the story gets really good (in my opinion). The problem with implausibility is that anything goes then. Here's an example of some of that 'shit writing' with an implausible ending to the above:

>> He waved his magic BTB wand and his wife Mabel and Paul (wherever he was) both caught fire and died screaming and begging him to forgive them. Then they went to hell, where they were kept as sex slaves by demented psycho demons and were forced to watch reruns of political debates from the early 21st century.

Now, that was a BTB ending, but not very plausible (I mean really . . . nobody'll ever keep copies of those debates . . . even in hell). I feel that implausibility can turn a very good story into a merely good or average one. Plausible endings, on the other hand, often leave us more satisfied. I do like Dangerouslyd's stuff . . . good ideas, and the writing moves you along. I just felt a bit odd about the conclusion.

Oh, here's some more highly implausible shit writing . . .

>> After 1000 years in hell, Mabel and Paul were 'rescued' by Cleo the Cantankerous Crow, who pulled them from hell and dropped them in purgatory. They married there, which was a horrible choice. Mabel found Paul despicable, and wondered how she ever could have cheated with him. Paul, for his part, found Mabel attractive, but couldn't stand how she always compared him negatively to her husband from a millennia ago when she'd been alive. He was really sick of it!! Cleo found this so amusing that she almost forgot to be cantankerous for a bit. It seemed like shortly after being rescued form physical hell, they quickly created their own mental hell (which can be much worse). "Selfish fools!!", thought Cleo cantankerously as she flew away.

Now there's some shit writing with my 'slant' on it. (There's more to the story, but Cleo asked me not to tell you right now . . . )

Good argument, but this is a he said - she said situation. The author doesn't say, but it appears the attack on her lover was many years ago. You have to assume that he took enough precautions when he did it so as not to get caught. So... a wife comes to the police with a story of how her husband crippled the guy and she has no proof to back up her claim. The police look at the situation where her husband has 'lost' all him money gambling and is leaving her, look at how long ago the attack happened, look at their current overwhelming case load and tell her to forget it. End of story.

Something is seriously, seriously wrong with someone who wastes his life to lying in wait to take revenge on his wife. I know he's a hero to some of you twisted fucks, but jeezy petes, what a loser.

1 *, cuz I can't do fewer.

Are you surprised by all the vitriolic comments? Seems a guy who is violent is a jerk, a guy who runs away is a jerk, a guy who threw his cheating wife out is an ass and a jerk. Common theme!? Yes! Any guy who doesn't accept crap heaped on him is a jerk! Think not assholes!!!

I don't think a little revenge is a bad thing when it comes to a cheating spouse, but

even as cold-blooded as I am (and trust me, I am), abandoning an old, sick woman

after all the years they were together is beyond cold-blooded, even for me. To me,

this story was just downright mean.

Let reality ruin a fantasmically great flash revenge story.

Just smile chuckle give an atta boy exhortation and move on to your next read

So many readers are upset when retribution falls on the head if those who have earned it. "It says in the Bible" they say about vengeance and two wrongs. They forget what the Bible and God said about coveting and cheating. Glad Im finally old enough to send all those phony hippocrits wishes to go to a painful hell

And having a two year affair with a known pussy hound that risks her husband's health is not?

Certainly, she was smug in thinking she got away with affair...and she can go live with lover

Hopefully, a woman is awaiting him at cabin

The bitch got what she deserved. He'll live a good retirement. Fuck the bitch.

She'll get his Social security. She'll get a lawyer once she tells one her story. His deceptions will fall apart and he'll be lucky to avoid jail time. The rest was bullshit. Poorly thought out drivel.

That was pure evil, letting her think that she had gotten away with it. She only stopped cause her lover was put out of commission.

Aww hell, this is gonna give Timriv a stroke.

Another tough guy wanna be writer. Go back to getting your ass fucked you lame cuck. You have the main loser in the story waiting 20 some years for revenge when all you have been doing is pulling your pud thinking of being cheated on while making such a crap story. Dangerouslydead is more like Dangerouslyboring.

She cheats, he's pissed, sets her up for a fall, and then watches from afar

This just so nasty. Perfect revenge on everyone. Man is evil genius.

If I thought it serious, it would bother me.

As fiction, it was FUN, FUN, FUN! I really do hate cheaters.

Payback however long afterwards

So long honey

Revenge is something to savour like a good whisky. Rushing into it doesn't always have a lasting effect.

Anger gives a reason to wake each morning. Then planning the eventual success of the plan.

There is too much crap talked about "Forgivness". There is no pleasure in forgiving someone who has wronged you! They get away with their crime!

Without doubt a long slow revenge is good for the soul.

Face it, the guy is the ultimate jerk. Cheating once aside, she didn't do it again and he poked her for 20 more years. At her age and condition put a hole thru his head, or at least his L4 vertabre to cripple him. What are they going to do to a 61 year old with health problems.

i.e. she cheated with one person, not one time.

Seems like he got the lover early and waited a while for her. Nasty, but good stuff.

So cold, so cruel, and so very fitting. Maybe the cheaters can have a life together now.

Excellent story

One angry bastard.

One lonely wife.

She should hope her affair partner will take her back.

Maybe she could serve Paul and get some inheritance once he is dead.

Re-reading it I now couldn't understand his anger.

22 years ago and only two years of cheating by his wife,

why didn't he just left her/divorce her after he hurt Paul 5 years later?

He kept her at his side hating her for 22 years? What for? A revenge at 61 years old?

It doesn't make sense to a sensible human being.

Love It!

Vindictive old bastard!

Poor old cheating bat, her chickens have finally come home to roost.

Pay Back Is Hell

I have no sympathy for cheaters but what hes doing is simply cruel to hideous degree.

It's basically a death sentence for her and really she didn't write that.

Leaving her alone with the house and the financial portier to throw until her death would have been the rational decent thing to do but apparently hes neither.

I'll be I feel more sympathy for her than I do him.

Hilarious flash. Creative and well executed. 5

He's killed in a car accident on his way to the airport.

Alone at 70 is alone indeed, and he's sentenced himself to that fate as well as her. "Dig two graves," indeed.

Dummy loves misery in old age.

This guy was an asshole. Her affair was 20 years ago. BTW, she only has to last a year and then collect social security at 62. She didn't work but he did. So at least that.

WTG! That was a good one, even if yoo short. He was great to wait that long, and not allow her to be the wiser. A great (too short), story.

Asshole

Ouch! :)

Like it 5*

Excellent 5

Sharp stab.

Wow what an amazing BTB. Revenge is a dish best served at JUST the most impactful, right time. Easy 5 stars.

And the explanation for all the feeble-minded man haters in comments... the reason he didn't divorce her for cheating when it happened was that if he did, she'd PROFIT from her cheating, by getting most of his assets AND his future income, just for being a fat assed lazy cunt who didn't bother contributing ANYTHNG to the family (even kids), the ultimate leech user enabled by in-justice family court system set up to fuck over men. This way, he was assured good sex till he was too old to care about it, AND financial justice (she got no profit from her betrayal).

What a sad story. He got his revenge on her lover but held on to his hate and anger for 20 years instead of choosing to live his life. He could have divorced her, left her or what ever, but to hold on to that anger and live in a loveless marriage for 20 years is kinda pathetic and sad.

he explained everything "I did not divorce you back then because you were the best fuck this side of the equator. I was used to having you around, and by the time I came to know all about the affair, it had run its course."

I think I'm seeing some inner-rage inside the writer. I like the shorter stories. Keep up the good work!

Dig two holes

I feel a no win, no fee lawyer has a pay day coming up.