All Comments on 'I'm a Usurper'

I have to say that is one of the best stories i read here but damn that just plain wrong.

Yes, I agree with the first comment, definitely WRONG, but my goodness, is that story HOT! Would love to see the mom's body, but probably not anywhere near as good as I can make it in my mind. Keep up the writing.

Very erotic. Just goes to show that any fertile woman can be bred by any man, regardless of age or social norm.

a sorry mom and a dumb daughter and weak hubby.who sick in this story?

I have to say, that you did a good job. It does have a little evil in it. But I was really starting to look for a big twist at the end. I was thinking that the Daughter would end up teaching her mother about pay back. Or something worse. I had a few hopes. But that is me. Good work anyway..

You're a fucking genius. Keep the stories coming.

single best story i have ever read. amazing. amazing. please keep stories like this coming. please.

You have a talent for writing extremely hot stories, but I think this one went over board just a little. It was really hot but I think the depths of evil that women sunk too was just a little too much. Maybe it's just me but that's what I think anyway. Keep writing though, you're very good

No one is better than you.

Should be listed under Erotic Horror.

The story was good, but I think it went just a little bit to far with the wickedness with this one. I know that's the way that you write and your a very good writter, I love all of your stories, but for me this one just went a bit to far. Keep up the good work though. I look forward to your next story

PERFECT. I don't think you should let up at all. Never let the wife win- no matter who she is. The wife should always lose. Always. No matter if its the daughter or the mother.

Thank you for getting back to a realistic story. This rates up there with the best you have written. Keep this style up for it will attract readers. I wish my mother-in-law was as sex driven as your story.

Wow! Maybe one or more of the babies you make will be a daughter that can also begin fucking your son-in-law and having babies by him, too?

your stories are the best

This shit is GOOD!

This is about the best fuckin' story I have read. I would love to fuck my MIL and knock he rup. She has a sweet ass and a beautiful set of tits. I think my wife would join us in a 3way since we fantasize about her mom in bed with us.

This story rocked. i love the evil bitch getting her way. Let's face it, most of us would love to have someone that hot and evil fucking us all the time.

I think thise was not only evil but completely crazy. Wickedness is something but she was pure evil. She was insane and out of horror movies.

I must say that anyone that can think this up has no emotions at all.

Stealing a friends first date is bad, but a mother screwing over her daughter??? thats just plain insane and demonically evil.

what a bitch...screwing ur own daughter like???? probably ur not even humanbeing.

You, are an idiot. You hurt your family members simply for 1 hour of lust? You're more crazy and insane than your daughter. Just remember bitch... 20 more years, and everything you own will decay. Your breats will sag to the floor, you'll be unatractive to everyone, your teeth will start to rot, and your skin will turn gray. No one will want to be around you - and you'll be lonley for all of your life. Take in the "pleasure" now. When you die, they'll be nothing but eternal darness, lonley, terrorizing, and undestructable. It's quite amazing, I'm 13 and realize this. Oh well, I guess you're just stupid... or simply... evil.

The mother should of made her daughter her and her studs slave,nOW THAT would be truly evil

I know my mom-in law wants me.I would love her to suck my cock.She's always eager to know how me and her daughter are doing.When I look directly at her she gets very weak.I think she is ready for me but dont know how to set this up without my wife knowing?I would love to splush her inner thighs with my cum as she rubs my cock,suck her clit & flap her pussy lips with my tongue.

That was so awsome! If i had a mil like meridith i would fuck her day and night and make her a baby making machine!

That you fucked your MIL in church was quite enuf. Perhaps another Immaculate Conception is in the works?

that story was fucked up no one is that evil to screw up her duaghters life that was just fucked up

This shit was actually hot. She's such a bitch but it was good.

never let the wife win! maybe your next one could be about the babysitter?

Possibly the hottest story I've ever read

She is a bitch....great villain.

Would'nt want her as My Mother or Lover. It's only a matter of time and she will "cuckold" Joey.

but who knows that could be her undoing as he might not put up with her sh!t.

your name fits you and i hope you get what you want but stop writing this shit dont worry you want hear from me again two is enough

Jenny should escape from the hospital and rip her mom' Tits off and kidnap their child. Cut off Joey's dick and jam up his ass.

This story screams of Borderline Personality Disorder. Makes me wonder if you meant to describe it or have had your own experiences with it. BPD women are hot... That is for sure. Just don't get stabbed (real life) like my buddy

I love all your stories!!!

She is a bad bitch, but I also think she's a little cliched. It's like you tried to put every bad quality you could into her,which is probably the point. In her own way she's an addict, needing a new thrill to satisfy her libido. A cold piece of work. I can't help wondering what inspired it.

Damn

I am just disgusted. if anything the daughter should be allowed revenge and to destroy her mother. to let this heartless bitch win is no win for the story.

This story is sick and pathetic. Straight up trash that shouldn't be on here.

This needs part two, where the daughter escapes the mental institution and goes after her mother and ex.

What a very strangely written story...lost interest shortly after the church and the confusion on who was fucking who.

Loved it!!

This is some kind of cartoon bullshit.

So, he came from a wealthy family but she bought the house that they live in? Like how much sense does that make? The more this reads, the more it sounds like the wife had a bigger inheritance.

Secondly, if the daughter had gotten her inheritance and put it into her own retirement account, as the husband was supposedly "good hearted", by the time the mother came along that money is untouchable even in an ironclad agreement as that's her money aka how even sport players still live a good life after retiring from the game.

Lastly, the father's will supercedes the prenup. And if it doesn't, the only smart person is Joey, he gets both their lives inheritance as the mother will be too blinded with rubbing it in, he gets her with a prenup hidden in the daughter's divorce papers.

Who cares about the little things. It's a wickedly evil story.

Have her run away. Have her ex husband again drive him insane. Then have him do the same while her mother watches and kill the mother and any children he gave her. Then get everything back.

Needs a sequel of the evil MIL.

Should come under humor. Sick humor.

What a wonderfully evil story. Love it!

Some of you have a extremely bad idea of a good story this like the others I have read like it is not a good story