All Comments on 'I'm SO Happy My Date Didn't Show Up'

Decently written, but obviously by a male.

It really turned me on!!

This was good. Very vivid descriptions, which is always a plus. I felt it was rushed though, and it ended so abruptly. I would have liked to see more of them in bed. What we got seemed like just an appetizer, after the build up.

Also, I dislike the story-as-a-letter format, but that's just my preference. It always seems stilted to me.