All Comments on 'Imagination'

but 'strait'(?). Is that American for straight?

This would have a much higher rating if it was someone actually doing all that to the waitress rather than just telling her about his fantasy...

Imagination is a wonderful thing. For the man to share his fantasy with the waitress took courage. Her accepting his honesty is very believeable, turning the fantasy into reality. Keep writing!

great writing once again,,,,,,,,,fell free to write a follow up on this one plz

Felt real and also a little different. Only change I'd make it adding more description more time to the sex. Really good.