by adrammalech
I really enjoyed your story. I usually don't care for real long stories but yours was compelling. It didn't get into a rut, it just kept getting better. Real nice job, keep up the great work.
I like the way you ended the story it was a great way to finish it. If you plan on writing more to the story I will gladly look forward to reading it but I think that the way this chapter finished up it would be a good place to stop. But like I said it's up to you I will gladly read it if you put out more. You are the 7th writer that I have found that adds a lot of detail to the stories on this website. You're 1 hell of a good writer keep up the good work my friend.
really good series, if this is the conclusion of vol.1 i can't wait to read vol.2
Like the story so far, will there be any more chapters?
Thank you for sharing such an amazing story with us! Even though it had several chapters, it never seems to be repetitive, and there was always something new. Even the sex scenes, which there were many of were written in a beautiful style that each one stands on its own. Bravo!!!!!
Sincerely
Daniel