by TheHellWasIThinking
What was this guy? Five foot three inches and one hundred and 35 pounds dripping wet? Because otherwise your description of him is ludicrous. And lacking sufficient motivations, their actions just seem silly. Did you proof read this? And I don't mean for punctuation and spelling errors. I mean to see if it made common sense. And the dialogue must have been written by a ten year old. Even for fiction, this was simply awful and not worth the time spent reading it.
MORE MORE PLEASE and hopefully it stays lesbian unless you show another male how much fun it is to crossdress without the 2 males having sex
loved it. the story deserves another chapter, if your up to it. I do love a story where the hubby and wife have lots of fun, with each other. the bond that should be there. very nice. the story really works. I think wife should be spanked or whatever she enjoys, for bringing an interloper into their home, on her birthday surprise. then maybe include a spanking for the interloper, while his wife gives and gets pleasure from her.
First, thank you for your reference to our story and your obvious enjoyment of it. We have both read yours and feel that you have done a good job of telling it. We hope that you enjoy your experience as much as we enjoyed ours. Playing can be tremendous fun. Ignore the naysayers. What do they know? Donna
I didn't catch the date this was written, so this may be for nothing. I hadn't been on Lit for a while so decided to visit. Please, finish the story.
I wasn't sure when Sam came home with Cindy. Especially not when she didn't give hubby any warning.
But hubby seems to have gotten things in hand.
Much better. Still, it could do with more chapters LOL.
Thanks to the author for sharing this story.
Great story. Read it back in 2015, still haven't given up on part 3