All Comments on 'In Loving Memory Pt. 01'

Wrong Category

Claire's pain is making my heart hurt. I cannot wait for the next part. Your writing is very vibrant - I can can feel, see and hear the story. Keep up your good work!

It's sadly true that this writing is remarkably different from much on Literotica ... because it's been done with attention to what used to be regarded as ordinary language skills.

Rant over.

I enjoyed reading this. It's got a hint of sexual tension. It's got something that helps readers identify with a character. And it's got mystery by the bucketful. So much unsaid.

Is it in the wrong category, or not? Mature? It remains to be seen. And seen soon, I hope.

Only thing I will say is, you need to learn the difference between breath and breathe, then use the right one.

...for putting a very human face on a community about which I know next to nothing.

If it IS in the wrong category, I am glad of it, as I would never have seen it had it been placed in BDSM.

You are off to a good start. Keep it up.

What a surprise, this series. It makes me thinking