All Comments on 'In More Ways Than One Ch. 04'

It appear she has begun to channel her inner Cian. Like attracts likes.

<3 it!

Nothing like a little payback. Just some editing will help keep the story flowing. Other than that, great job!

Im addicted to this story, to Cian. I love their intense love. please keep posting?!

Yippee. Love her character.. Take control

You keep throwing me for a loop... Every time I think I know how this story might go you alter the direction... Complex and intertwined... In any event the lead female seems rather immature.. & .. silly...I actually like the story but I hope I'll feel the same in your chapters to come.. Chapter 3 has been my favorite thus far.. Waiting to see what you will do next......

wow, this story really depicts the saying " it hurts so good"'! cain is bad ass, i wonder how his going to get out of marring victoria or will he?

Do you really need to ask? AIDEN all the way

This story is fucking hot!

More please.

but needs better editing

Oh how I wish there was much more. This story is getting better and better with each Chapter. I'm so glad that she's gaining knowledge with Cain she so needed it.

THE STORY IZ THE SHIT KEEP IT CUMMING FOR UR FANS

A black woman who went to law school decides that being a mob boss's mistress is the best way to go rather than start her life over and be in a relationship where she can be the one and only, hold the title of wife? Being his slut on the side is enough because he's "her" man, especially after he anally rapes her?

How silly of all those black people, especially the women, to fight for the right to have caucasians not automatically treat black women as if the only thing they're good for is spreading their legs.

But the same complaint, only about black men only wanting white women for sex is common on here. Why don't we all complain the the only thing white and black women and men want from the other is sex, and get it over with.

i just loved this story.

I just started reading this story and was wondering if there is gonna be more I was really enjoying it and would like to see if its gonna continue its really getting good so if so please update soon thanks!!

Oh please oh please oh please oh please!!!! Pretty please!!! Update soonish? This is effin brill!!!

I'm hoping that Keya either woman's up and gets awat rom Cian's crazy possessive ass or he finally treats he like the woman he "thinks" he loves by "owning" her! Kudos!

Chick finally gets it. The power of the pussy FINALLY dawns on her. Mix that with absence, some symptoms akin to heroin withdrawal.. results..recognition to as to who really wants/needs who.

Any questions are clarified; straight with no chaser.

idk if it's just me but that story made no sense. i'm sorry but i think you shiuld have developed your story a bit differently

You have to finish this great story!

Please ??? There has to be more, right?? Was that the end??? Still, it was a good story, but would be even better if Cian admits that he loves her or maybe even Aiden???

That was disturbing.

Crazy chapter! idk how she didn't know he was irish-mafia, but i kinda loved how it all came out at once and then how badass she got in the end! PLEASE write more! :)

I don't know whose side I should be on Team Cian or Team Aiden! They both seem like pretty good guys - just in some bad business. It's sad that Cian hides her and will marry another cause K ain't "mainstream." Maybe Aiden would treat her much better. They could run away together.

The sex was hot, the fighting was hot, the fact that she finally took control of her life....I think that will make him love her even more no matter how they both deny it! Please continue this story.....it is waaaaayyy too good to leave unfinished! I give you 5 stars!

The sex was hot, the fighting was hot, the fact that she finally took control of her life....I think that will make him love her even more no matter how they both deny it! Please continue this story.....it is waaaaayyy too good to leave unfinished! I give you 5 stars!

This was too good.

It is so hard to find stories (black female/white male) like these on this site. These are the stories I enjoy reading. I really hope there is more to these too. So much misunderstanding and secrets all though I am surprised that Keya is not pregnant from Cian or Aidian. The fact that one of them truly loves her (wanting to find out which one). I hope you have more to add to this story.

This has to be one of the best story lines I've seen so far please continue on with this story.

I really do hope you finish this story. I'm anxious to see the outcome.

Okay, I like this chapter much better. He's still an asshole, she's still weak, but the story is better, and clearer to what is going on with everyone.

Is this the end? I hope not, it is too good not to find out what happens with Keya, Cian, & Victoria. I like the humor involved in the story. Is Cian going to marry Victoria or defy his father and stay with or marry Keya? This is easily five stars.

It's been seven years, and I have no closure! Please give this story a proper ending?