All Comments on 'In My Line of Work'

my five. Fine writing. Thank you.

Writting not bad, just didn't like story line

One of the better stories I have read on this site. Also enjoyed your interracial story as well. More interracial please, it made my day and my fat, black cock rock hard here at work!! Congrats, I'd love to dick smack you with it myself...

I thought that your story was very well written. The erotic portions were fun, though not really "fun time" fun. The idea and structure of the story was great. It made me wish there was more to read, though i think you constructed the story very well, and it did not feel incomplete. Overall a five star story dear writer. please keep up the good work.

An extremely well conceived and written story, thank you

Great writing. It was erotic and still esthetic.Somehow you've managed to make me interested in her story not just the erotic part. Consider writing books.

Very good, thank you

Very nicely done. You've taken an old cliche'--"the whore with a heart of gold"--and transformed it into something original and affecting. It's especially nice to see a sex worker depicted, sympathetically and without degradation, as a genuine human being.

I'm a little unclear about the father's role in the atrocity. Was he a good guy working undercover, or was he a participant: the "popular local police officer"? Still a 5-star story, anyway.

I liked this story, the images were of two different worlds, yet connected. Excellent original writing.

Recent read great stories in parallel that left it open about her parents.