All Comments on 'In Search of Flesh Blood Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
WTF?

Where's the story? This effort is beyond lame; if you run out of inspiration this quickly, find something else to do with your time. Minus 5 stars

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Vampire?

were you trying to make the dad sound like a perverted, sex-mad vampire?

Bambi_DoeBambi_Doeabout 11 years ago

Lols sounds like daddy gets to taste everyone. His son's future mate & her mother.

mikeywazomikeywazoabout 11 years ago
Too short.

I like where this is going, but there isn't enough here to be considered a full chapter.

redlion75redlion75about 11 years ago

sounds like dad is going to fuck her first just to see if she is ok for his son.

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