All Comments on 'In Step Ch. 07'

Please continue this story. I can't tell you how much I have enjoyed it so far.

I have been a Lit member for years. I cannot remember a story series that has been so consistently good, erotic and literate with charcters that you actually are interested in. Ever. I have to admit, I am as interested in finding out what happens to George, Donna, Mark & Kendall as I am in reading about the sex.

I think you deserve a spot between the best authors on this site (like Scorpio44(a), scouries, rgjohn)! You're a natural talent for realistic and humorous dialogues as well as ingeniously designed plots and constant flow of your stories. Please keep it coming, I'm already a great fan of yours! Thank you very much!!!

After reading this latest installment, I felt I had to compliment the author of this amazingly complicated, yet erotic story. I just can't wait until you have everyone being finally honest with each other, and the results of that honesty! Keep up the good work, my friend!

I have been reading literotica stories for years, and this is one of the best. Congratulations.

Another great chapter!

said in the preliminary comments that the sex would build from the start to later chapters. I felt that it did continuously from ch. 01 to ch. 06 which was one of the hottest that I have read. This one was more evenly paced with good sex, but it was like the story was getting a bit of a rest, taking a breath, and getting ready for the final sprint. I'm enjoying it so much that I am going to stop this comment and get on to the next chapter. Thanks Ron. (an aside - for Kendall and Mark - who really cares if they are step brother and sister, they aren't blood relatives, so it is not too out of line for them to fall in love and continue the relationship, and college is the perfect place to do so.)

Still a hot story but not as steamy as the previous chapter. Let's hope George gets clued in on the next chapter.

"Mark would become her stepbrother, and as such, they could and would never have any kind of normal relationship."

Bullsh*t!!

Since they are not 'blood relatives' there would be absolutely nothing to stop a relationship!