All Comments on 'In Step Ch. 09'

I really like your story very much but, please, take a look at http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Hear,_hear and try and get some information about the difference between 'principle' and 'principal'. This really distracts from enjoying an otherwise first-rate story.

your story is so hot and good all the way thru , but cliff hanger mode does not build interrest for me. it changes the flow of the story . only my thought. thankyou

oh no! this cannot end this way! asshole!

drives me up a wall. Please see my comment for Ch. 01. As for ending with George mad and the threesome feeling guilty, I'm still hoping that Kendall can work her magic, and pull them all together. That's the logical climax, but a twist would be to have this incident drive them all apart forever or at least until they thought about how much fun they could have together. Now that we have several possible conclusions, I think I'll just read the real one. I'm really enjoying this story and looking forward to their climax. Thanks to Ron.

drives me up a wall. Please see my comment for Ch. 01. As for ending with George mad and the threesome feeling guilty, I'm still hoping that Kendall can work her magic, and pull them all together. That's the logical climax, but a twist would be to have this incident drive them all apart forever or at least until they thought about how much fun they could have together. Now that we have several possible conclusions, I think I'll just read the real one. I'm really enjoying this story and looking forward to their climax. Thanks to Ron.

Hope the next chapter shows a strong George.

Loved the threesome but was disappointed George didn't come around right away. Hopefully Kendall will be able to convince him.

These two women may be good looking but they are nothing but air headed sluts. If I was in this situation with my father or son which ever the case might be I would hope one of us would have the good sense to grab the other and walk away from these two use less whores.