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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

REALLY REALLY LOVED THIS!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Justawriter

My gawd this was lovely, excellent!!!!!

VCHeyshamVCHeyshamover 10 years ago
Clever!

And very sweet :-)

LiteClowLiteClowalmost 11 years ago

Awesome. Different. Cute. Perfect.

Mistress_CanadaMistress_Canadaalmost 14 years ago
Such a great story

You painted the scene beautifully with your words. You write with a real sense of both character and setting. Well done

nomoretears00nomoretears00almost 14 years ago
Interesting and different

Very unusual...I enjoy your stories.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Really original!

And a fun read. Thanks!

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Former SR71 pilot, currently professional writer and book editor; writes under name "habu" on other erotica sites. My erotica books can be found under the author name habu or Dirk Hessian (and coauthored books with Sabb under the names Shabbu or Stephen Kessel) at S...