All Comments on 'In the Closet'

If they're American's, why did the mother get sent to The Priory, surely there are extremely competent rehab places scattered all over America, and if they're English, why do they sound so American? Weirdly schizophrenic dialogue, it sounds like the author is trying to pander to the American readership and not doing it too well; apparently us brit readers are so unimportant to him, or he's so scared of being criticised for being a brit, that he's cast his dialogue in an idiom that no 'English' English-speaker would ever use, especially what seems to be a wealthy British family like this, just to appeal to the transatlantic readership. Poor effort, and not appreciated. Or possibly he's American and just hasn't done his homework...

How can any person install a doorlock in mere seconds? You need to drill a hole in the door and in the doorframe first.

Secondly: What is the purpose of telling the story about the exwife/mother? it seems completely irrelevant to the rest of the story. For your next story try to remember: "Less is more".

There was no sex between the father and daughter, hence, no incest. This was interracial.

Tough comments from critics. Details were negligible for me. Still a hot story despite no actual physical relationship between father and daughter. If you are not too phased by the negative comments, I would encourage you to conclude this story to its inevitable outcome. I think you are an excellent writer with a keen eye for details so you need to push the naysayers aside and keep writing!

First to the Anon person.... who says there wasn't already a hole for a lock, maybe they had the hole there but hadn't gotten around to getting her a lock.

Second to the guy who said this was in the wrong category.... It's not the Incest/Taboo category doesn't only need to be about incest.... the Taboo part of this story was daddy getting off while watching his daughter get fucked by a BBC

Thirdly.... love the story but I don't think mom really needed to be mentioned in such great detail....otherwise good job

That's all folks

loved it. cat wait for chapter 2!

If the door already had a doorknob type latch, all you have to do is remove it and install one with a lock, It fits in the same holes.

Thanks for all your comments, I really appreciate everyone's thoughts. This was my first ever submission, so hopefully I'll get better with practise. Thanks again :)

This story made me have to masturbate! Dayum, I can't wait for more!

I hope to see a chapter 2 soon !!

Chapter two please.

Hell ya great story

chapter 2?

You are aware of what the popular figurative meaning of "in the closet" is right????

Really hot story hope there's more to come.

that is a great start, do not listen to any critics, in my opinion they are people who can't create, an must criticize those that can create, now will u please write chapter 2, an tell us what happens next, maybe even include a 3sum with her boyfriend

awesome!

but too short, please another chapter or two

I'm surprised, I quite enjoyed that. 4/5.

I believe the story is a little too short; it could have been drawn out, the anguish of the father.

The girl could have noticed her father e.g. made eye contact which then could have been built upon.

Overall, just makes me want more!